Shiver, wake up!
You rock!

I think I like Skating the best of your new ones. I realate to it cause not only do I live in the north but somtimes I feel like that. Like your on the edge and not sure if your going to fall off.

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Clue to the invasion of the buttocks. All the victims in the picture sound and look similar to ET the extraterrestrial. Can you spot John Regan The abductor. Why is that frisbee on that dudes head. Its like a green throw in frisbee. On his head. My Stuff Set the image of the school to Neon 9/11

Cold dreams,
they touch upon me, sending
shivers in the morning light.
Eyelids fluttering,
an attempt to grasp
at my surroundings...
but blindness shrouds my heart
no more.

For the first time I can see,
and the air is ice
but I can breathe it.
Still, the chill will hold itself at bay -
even in the distances across,
I feel you here.

(with me)

Stronger, every time my heart beats.

It makes me turn towards the happiness,
although I badly ache -
as I long too much for your embrace.

But there is such a comfort
in sharing the same sunlight,
though at different times of day...
and the oceans cannot separate
these feelings
carried on the breeze.
A gentle wind that blows the sting away...

...and makes me smile
like a dreamy child,
basking in the newfound
mesmerizing
peace.









Wonderfully terrified
of such new feelings.

Never has free-falling
felt so good before...

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could make me love you less...

Steph....That is just beautiful!!!

Reading that, reminds me of a flower slowly blooming its self.
Or like reading a book, with every chapter, is like a new begining.
That is very deep, and very heartfelt! <333
I just love the way you express your feelings, and the way everything
fits together the way its written.
Everything you write, is very special!!
Absolutely Beautiful!!
<33333

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Always Live Life To The Fullest,
And Never Take Anything For Granted!

That is an awesome poem. I loved it.

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what can i say your stuff is brillant

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Today's the day when the dreaming ends...

Close my mind,
to the burning doubts

and this fear
that's quivering off me
in silent rivulets.

Ignore the sting,
ignore it all,
and lose myself in thoughts of you
instead.

Close my eyes,
breathe in and out...

just take my hand
and lead me out
underneath the stars -
the sparkling beauty
up above,
that both of us
can see and love
together.

I only want
to stay here with you
forever.

i like with you, it has contradicting emotions in it and i dont know what the word is i want... i think im after its relatable to the reader.

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Today's the day when the dreaming ends...

Tremors
unravel me,
as it all reopens in front of me -
the endless abyss
of all that is haunting,
a numbing encasement
of weakening
dreams.

Caught between
the grips of pure happiness
and heart-searing despair,
emotional confusion takes over me -
I'm not sure exactly what
I'm supposed
to feel.

I've never felt such a soaring hope
until I met her -
my truly kindred spirit,
who seemed to know my heart
before I did myself.

I've never felt so much emotion,
or such a mixture of these feelings…
and I can drift in the quiet peace
she brings me,
in place of horrid night-time pain,
transforming
more and more.

Still,
somehow the harshness creeps upon me
telling me I'm not worth this much.
I refuse,
just refuse to listen
this time.

I can only stay standing,
staring down
into the darkened pit
before my eyes...

...and fight any chances
of falling back
inside.

Oooh...I like 'Pit of Despair'. U got talent

May I ask...who or what was ur inspiration?