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EcLiPsE · 12-04-2003, 03:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kaydee420

:::wipes away a tear:: that was amazing!

No joking there. That was beautifully written. I really loved that one. It was so amazing! And congrads on winning the song award in the Poetry Contest!

**Kaydee** · 12-04-2003, 03:37 PM

YES CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!

ThatUnimportant · 12-04-2003, 03:44 PM

absolutely wonderful, you have incredible talent...

i hope theyre only words, and im sorry if theyre not [they usually arent]...

Shivercide · 12-04-2003, 05:02 PM

Thank you SO much, Kaydee, Eclipse and ThatUnimportant, for your sweet comments...but *appears dumbfounded* I won for best song? Really? Wow, thanks.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThatUnimportant

i hope theyre only words, and im sorry if theyre not [they usually arent]...

If you mean do they mean something, then of course, everything I write means something.

EcLiPsE · 12-04-2003, 05:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shivercide

Thank you SO much, Kaydee, Eclipse and ThatUnimportant, for your sweet comments...but *appears dumbfounded* I won for best song? Really? Wow, thanks.

You are very very welcome! Go express your thankfullness on the Poetry contest page! LOL give an acceptance speech, that would be cool! :P

Shivercide · 12-05-2003, 06:55 PM

[fade]Fade[/fade]

In a flash,
the ground that I once
stood upon
crumbled
from underneath -
leaving everything above it
to lose its balance
and fade
into nothingness.

Here I lay,
afraid to go to sleep
again...
remembering too much,
breathing too little
and crushed
under the weight
of feeling.
I am lost,
drowning
in this darkness,
inhaling nothing
but more thoughts,
more pain
and more pills...
until the bottle lies empty,
on the floor,
by my side.
Here I am,
crying myself to sleep
again...
but this time never to wake up.

EcLiPsE · 12-06-2003, 09:29 AM

WOW! *Reminds you to enter THIS one in the next contest!* Great poem! I LOVED it!! That was so amazing. So much talent that you have, and I want to see more! Great job!

Shivercide · 12-06-2003, 08:41 PM

Operation

Scalpel,
bloody scalpel

severing my dreams.

Doctor,
crazy doctor

surgically removing my life from me.

My hopes
my heart
taken out
cut apart

not even wiping up the tears I bleed
leaving my soul to flow out in burning streams...

frank182 · 12-06-2003, 09:03 PM

wow- your stuff is really amazing! i wish i could say something else- but that sums it up!!

Shivercide · 12-08-2003, 12:23 AM

Eugenia...you have done so much to help me you don't even know...you've given me wings, you've restored my hope. I am so thankful, so grateful to have come across you...and this poem is for you.

:heart:
Steph

Beautiful Things

When the darkness,
the darkness
shall take over day,
there are the stars,
filling emptiness,
mapping our way.

Wandering, lost
in an enraptured forest
of my thoughts...
weary, afraid
that this won't ever go away.
But I know
that I am not in this
all alone,
and if it weren't for such
darkness,
I may have
never come across
your light.
Remember,
forever,
that you have
so much more strength
beyond any means that you know;
it radiates
from your words,
your determination,
your soul...

...so when tears
run down
into the darkness
of dirt,
the worst of our dreams...
know that out of it will
g r o w
such beautiful things.

12-05-2003, 06:55 PM	#66 (permalink)
Shivercide is very lurved Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 24 Posts: 3,072 Points: 5,169.51 Bank: 3,466,551.94 Total Points: 3,471,721.45 Donate	Fade [fade]Fade[/fade] In a flash, the ground that I once stood upon crumbled from underneath - leaving everything above it to lose its balance and fade into nothingness. Here I lay, afraid to go to sleep again... remembering too much, breathing too little and crushed under the weight of feeling. I am lost, drowning in this darkness, inhaling nothing but more thoughts, more pain and more pills... until the bottle lies empty, on the floor, by my side. Here I am, crying myself to sleep again... but this time never to wake up.

12-06-2003, 09:29 AM	#67 (permalink)
EcLiPsE Mmm...Mmm...Good!!! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: claremont, nc. Age: 20 Posts: 360 Points: 451.00 Bank: 227.48 Total Points: 678.48 Donate	WOW! Reminds you to enter THIS one in the next contest! Great poem! I LOVED it!! That was so amazing. So much talent that you have, and I want to see more! Great job! __________________ \|but i need to survive.\| \|tonight. tonight.\|

12-06-2003, 08:41 PM	#68 (permalink)
Shivercide is very lurved Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 24 Posts: 3,072 Points: 5,169.51 Bank: 3,466,551.94 Total Points: 3,471,721.45 Donate	Operation Operation Scalpel, bloody scalpel severing my dreams. Doctor, crazy doctor surgically removing my life from me. My hopes my heart taken out cut apart not even wiping up the tears I bleed leaving my soul to flow out in burning streams...

12-08-2003, 12:23 AM	#70 (permalink)
Shivercide is very lurved Join Date: Jul 2003 Age: 24 Posts: 3,072 Points: 5,169.51 Bank: 3,466,551.94 Total Points: 3,471,721.45 Donate	Beautiful Things Eugenia...you have done so much to help me you don't even know...you've given me wings, you've restored my hope. I am so thankful, so grateful to have come across you...and this poem is for you. :heart: Steph Beautiful Things When the darkness, the darkness shall take over day, there are the stars, filling emptiness, mapping our way. Wandering, lost in an enraptured forest of my thoughts... weary, afraid that this won't ever go away. But I know that I am not in this all alone, and if it weren't for such darkness, I may have never come across your light. Remember, forever, that you have so much more strength beyond any means that you know; it radiates from your words, your determination, your soul... ...so when tears run down into the darkness of dirt, the worst of our dreams... know that out of it will g r o w such beautiful things.

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Kaydee Mommy 2 Be !! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Chesapeake, VA Age: 26 Posts: 1,547 Points: 6,703.75 Bank: 112,708.65 Total Points: 119,412.40 Donate	YES CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!

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ThatUnimportant Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: right here. Age: 26 Posts: 28 Points: 638.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 638.00 Donate	absolutely wonderful, you have incredible talent... i hope theyre only words, and im sorry if theyre not [they usually arent]...

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