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06-14-2008, 12:06 PM
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n00blet
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Belgium
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Short, but it's Mine
My first Poem ever written in english. Short, but it means a LOT for me and it's very personal. And there's a chance that there may be spelling errors.
Seated in a chair of Sorrow Dreaming of what could be Imagining going on without You Was one of my frightening Fears Blinded by a Sun's shine I continue to hold on But all I ever wanted Was your Embrace to carry on. Charmical. |
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06-14-2008, 12:12 PM
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burn my heart to dust
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It is short, but it's done very well in saying so much with just a few amount of words. I especially love the second verse.
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06-25-2008, 11:15 AM
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Nothing Brings Me Down
Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Over The Rainbow
Age: 31
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away that, I felt like that not to long ago. Your poem is very deep, and expresses so much feeling and emotion. And as well, has so much strength to it. I love it, you are very talented with your words, even for soemthing short, but says SO much. Amazing....I would love to see more of your stuff! <33
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06-30-2008, 05:28 AM
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 I hope you post more! I'd love to read more of your work.
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08-08-2008, 10:07 AM
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The Daisy to my Duck
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Tuomas Holopainen's bed ♥
Age: 17
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I don't know what I like about this piece but I do like it...a great deal actually...perhaps it's because it's so short yet says so much? I'm not sure...but I do love this
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