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Old 07-29-2007, 01:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Should I call it a poem? That' s to share with you.

Sometimes I use to feel quite sad or needed to express myself.

I am not an expert in poetry, but I use to write to discover what I have in my heart and I cannot see.

This writing is an expression of me... I hope it would be useful to all of you.

************************************************** ********

Calling You

Why should I cry
If you are my brightness?
Why are you shouting me
If you know my madness
Because of you?

Calling you from here
I am searching you from here
Looking for you to find you
And keep your soul for me

Why don' t you answer
To my calling?
I' m waiting for you from my throne
What should I do
To convince you that I love you?
I died for you
To save your life
I live for you
To give you all

Just answer to me
And you will be welcome
To my place

And remember...
I love you.

************************************************** **************************

Killing (I am alive)

Killing you is just enough
Killing you is not so sad
Broken chains
Freedom at least
Shining like the sun
You are not the only one
I am shining thank to you
I am alive
And you...
You are just dead

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Diamod Ring

Diamond ring
Brightness and strings
Music and love
You are in my crawl

Life and death
Not only lonelyness
People and you
You are just the Truth

King with a crown
Kingdom round and round
You are the Love
And me only a son

If you want to be happy
Just answer my call
Showing to you my Power
Showing to you who is the Lord

Master of the universe I am
Not who is writing
But certainly who is speaking
I offer to you eternal life
You only give me your heart

************************************************** ***************************

Knowing One Thing

Walking the long way
Trying to keep myself
Speaking to you again
And I wonder if you listen to me
I don' t know the end
Someone think is death
I know one thing
Let me tell you this
When the end arrives
I will go to paradise
Heaven on earth shall become
And every life will be
Judged by the One
Where do you wanna finished
After going around the world?
I know there' s a happy ending
For every suffering soul
You know my heart deep inside
You know I' m still alive
Thanks for your love
Thank you my Lord
King over every prince
Lord over the entire world
You know every heart
And darkness will not win
Because for you is just enough
To regret ourselves from our sins
Evil and good are struggling
For every human being on earth
Whose the victory instead?
Who is the author of happiness?
The light will shine like a torch
And the shadows will runaway
For ever with fear to your Love

************************************************** ********

What about Love? (You are my reason of living)

What about love?
What about you?
If you only knew
That I only want
To be happy in my life
To the end of the world
Darkness expands
Everywhere to the last
Voice I' ve ever heard
To realize myself
That you just want me
As a friend
You are beatiful today
Like a flower in my bed
But you are poison to my death
When I only wanted your happiness
Cold and dead
Everything is black
The unique light I can see
Is not you neither my back
Doors closed...
Just you

************************************************** ****************************

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Old 07-30-2007, 01:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice poems.
Keep Posting.
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Old 07-30-2007, 10:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Calling You

Why should I cry
If you are my brightness?
Why are you shouting me
If you know my madness
Because of you?

Calling you from here
I am searching you from here
Looking for you to find you
And keep your soul for me

Why don' t you answer
To my calling?
I' m waiting for you from my throne
What should I do
To convince you that I love you?
I died for you
To save your life
I live for you
To give you all

Just answer to me
And you will be welcome
To my place

And remember...
I love you.
I really loved this one. I kinda found some of my own thoughts up there... x)
The other two are great too. Keep writing

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Old 08-04-2007, 01:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Another one to share...

Words (Is that fair?)

Words of your heart
Words that hurt me much
Words like open doors
Words like keys to close
What you' ve opened
Whithout a reason
Giving death by every step
Of your long way home
Do you wanna be alive
Or do you wanna be dead?
Your darkness is still
Under the light above
That you don' t reach
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Old 09-21-2007, 02:06 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I' ve been thinking

Going down...

Going down
I found a crown
Going down I am
Still without knowing
Who you are
Tell me one thing
Talk to me
I can' t hear
Your voice is mute to me
You never listened
What I had to say
Why are you calling me
When I look for you
Everywhere, everytime?
Thinking about you
On how we are as human beings
Sometimes I fall down
And I do not know
What is going on
Around
Feelings of sadness and desperation
I can teel you this without hesitation
Where Am I?
Who are you?
Why you don' t talk to me?
I don' t hear your voice...
Screaming...
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Old 10-05-2007, 03:21 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Through the rain (Even if you are blind)

Through the rain (Even if you are blind)

Can you see through the rain
After your blindness
Even if you only see darkness
But a light in the end?

Can you see me
Walking the long way home
Shining like a diamond
Opened wings to show
What I feel today?

With silence I speak to you
And you can' t hear me
Come to me and find me
Waiting for you
With my opened heart

I love you since you were borned
Since you felt down
Because of your first mistake
But even if you' re wrong
I found you, suffering soul
To give you what I have
To give you my heart

Remember...
One heart...
One love...
Only you...
I am waiting after all

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Old 10-05-2007, 10:52 AM   #7 (permalink)
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hi. I speccially liked this stanza..maybe because It was my first reding of the thread

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Calling You

Why should I cry
If you are my brightness?
Why are you shouting me
If you know my madness
Because of you?
and this one too

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But even if you' re wrong
I found you, suffering soul
To give you what I have
To give you my heart
Knowing One Thing is entirely very deep. You expressed your feelings without any "noise"..just you and your pen.good for you.

IMO your poetry is easy to understand. simple but charming.. keep on posting..

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I wonder

I wonder

I wonder
Do you know me?
Do you really know
When you touched me
For the first time
I kissed you?
Lips like black death
Frozen and cold
Like mi last breath

Why did you speak to me
When you knew
That my heart was broken
Because of the lie
With you did steal my freedom?
Crying...
Bleeding..
Dieing...

But I listened to your voice
There is no noice
In your words
Only you
And your eyes
Looking at what you' ve done
Breaking a life that was starting
Growing up

I wonder
what you' d done
If I' d tell you
My feelings to your heart
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Smoke in the air

Smoke in the air

Smoke in the air
When I' ve tried to be fair
Illness at last
That' s why I run so fast
My pills are waiting for me
Just another day
Just another night
Only affliction and desperation
Because I don' t know my future
Even If the future is just the same
I will not blame
Because I know the same thing
My future is death
But If I die tomorrow
I will not feel shame
Because all my entire life
I' ve just tried to do my best
I' ve made mistakes
And that' s for sure
But to feel secure
I only believe...
Just to be safe
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Flying Eagle (Hunting)

Flying Eagle (Hunting)

Flying Eagle where have you been?
Reaching the skies across over sea
Looking the lands with straight eyes
Like a guard in heaven
As an angel you are

Flying Eagle where do you sleep?
Because all your life you spent your time

(Over the trees)

Thank you beautiful bird
For taking care of ourselves
I look your eyes and I realize
That you are allways in heaven
Looking and flying
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