Lyli

I used to draw a lot, mostly manga style art, but not only. Now the lovely World of Warcraft takes up about 99% of my life. Tee hee.

Here, http://s59.photobucket.com/albums/g3...02008/?start=0 is a photobucket link to some of my sketches I come up with. I don't have a scanner, instead, I use my webcam to take pictures (I'm cheap), so it doesn't capture all the detail and sometimes makes certain features look deformed or just plain bad, when I, personally, think they look better when they're right in front of me. However, I am aware of mistakes I make, I just don't bother to fix them sometimes. Anyway, I'd love some feedback with ideas or what you think about my art. :>)

Sweet Tigger

I love your work, it has amazing detail, and feeling and
emotions.
I love the action you add to each one, you can plainly see
exactly what the pic is telling you.
Awesome work, I would love to view more, whenever possible! \m/

Lyli

Thank you.

Naikuu

nice, strong lines. great anime/manga style.

only thing i could say is sometimes the anatomy is a little off, particularly in proportions of the head, even though i know it's a manga style which isn't always proportional, it looks awkward. maybe it's just the webcam though.

good work. nice detail love the strong clean lines the best

Nolla

I love them, especially the second picture on the first page. Lovely...love her lips and eyes

Jane

I agree with most of what Naikuu said. It's hard to give you any kind of criticism, because it differs from each drawing. Some drawings you have certain things drawn completely out of proportion, but there are other drawings where you draw those things in correct proportion, so it's hard to say. It seems like many times though, there's always something off in the drawing, and there tends to be more issues in the faces. Sometimes the hairline isn't right, or the eyes are too low, or too close together, or sometimes the lips are too far down on the chin, etc. But like I said, the same issues aren't always evident in other drawings.

You do a good job overall with proportion though. Some of these full body drawings are done very well, and like Naikuu mentioned, your lines are very good. Overall, these are well done, I would just work on consistency.