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09-30-2006, 09:34 PM
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SoffioDellaVita's Lyrics
I've been writing since I was little, but I only started writing (good) lyrics when I got into Evanescence, so I've only been doing it for a few years. My lyrics mostly reflect my Christianity and my moodniess (you might still be interested even if you're not Christian, I often make the subject broad enough so that it could apply to a few things). I just wrote lyrics to a song a few minutes ago, and I'm really excited by them. I don't know why. They're nothing compared to Amy Lee's masterpieces, but my style of writing is completely different from hers. I used to write Evanescence-style songs, but I realized that wasn't me at all. Anywho, here it is. I have tons more, if anyone cares. I might post them sometime later.
POWERFUL IN YOU I’d be your sacrifice But you already layed down for me I would have given you everything But I was born with this disease I’ll give what I can Can I run from the way you make me feel? I would only trip and fall Can I release myself to lose my heart in yours? Can I really do that? I am so small My life’s nothing at all But in my weakness You make me strong I am so weary Can you hear me? I’m stronger now Powerful in you Lost my goal again Too many voices reveberating in my head I’d offer to carry all your pain But you know I would have fallen Under all the weight Can I run from the way you make me feel? I would only trip and fall Can I release myself to lose my heart in yours? Can I really do that? I am so small My life’s nothing at all But in my weakness You make me strong I am so weary Can you hear me? I’m stronger now Powerful in you Huddled on the floor I realize I am nothing more Than who I am in you Sickened by my sickness I know now You came down to fix it I am everything in you Everything in you I am so small My life’s nothing at all But in my weakness You make me strong I am so weary Can you hear me? I’m stronger now Powerful in you I feel my muscles growing stronger I’m powerful, powerful in you I feel my pulse beating faster And I’m alive again ©Stephanie M. Thanks for reading, and for feedback in advance (I don't mind if you actually judge it and write more than "that's good". I'm always looking for ways to improve.) Last edited by SoffioDellaVita : 09-30-2006 at 10:22 PM. |
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10-01-2006, 09:21 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2006
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Heh...Evanescence-y style isn't for everyone, it's good you know when it was time to change it- I've been writing for ages, and I've only gotten...slightly good in the past year and a half. XD
I'm Jewish, I don't really incorporate that into my writing, but it's cool that you do, I'm sure it puts a whole new facet of style into your writing. ^^ I really liked these lyrics, too. 'Specially the first line.
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