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Godzilla · 07-16-2006, 08:49 AM

If this is life then why do I live
Is there somethin' I could do or somethin'g I could give
From what I'm seein' I cause nothin' but pain
You should see the look on people's faces when they hear my name
Everytime I'm alone I reminice
of all the old times that were filled with bliss
It's funny how much can change in 4 years
Thinkin' about it brings me to tears
People say that I ain't seein' the right reality
And that for all this time I had the wrong mentality
But how could I believe this when nothin' good comes my way
And if something does it'll be gone in a day
It hurts knowin' my brother wishes I was never born
Everyday I have to wake up and feel his scorn
It's even worse because he wishes I'd die
This really hurts deep inside of my mind
This all seems like a really bad dream
It just makes me want to scream
The truth is that I'm awake
I have to put what little I have at stake

That's a little some thing I wrote a couple of weeks ago, I plan on finishing it soon

stringssing3 · 07-19-2006, 01:00 AM

Sounds very promising. I cant wait to read it when it is finished. Keep up the good work. ~Rep points!!!~ =]=]

Godzilla · 07-19-2006, 07:05 AM

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Originally Posted by stringssing3

Sounds very promising. I cant wait to read it when it is finished. Keep up the good work. ~Rep points!!!~ =]=]

Thanks man can I add you to my buddy list?

stringssing3 · 07-21-2006, 09:50 AM

of course you can. uh. just PM me or something.

Melissa-Marie · 07-21-2006, 01:21 PM

It sounds great, can't wait to read it when you're finished with it

07-16-2006, 08:49 AM	#1 (permalink)
Godzilla Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In the depths of my mind Posts: 63 Points: 484.45 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 484.45 Donate	Something I wrote If this is life then why do I live Is there somethin' I could do or somethin'g I could give From what I'm seein' I cause nothin' but pain You should see the look on people's faces when they hear my name Everytime I'm alone I reminice of all the old times that were filled with bliss It's funny how much can change in 4 years Thinkin' about it brings me to tears People say that I ain't seein' the right reality And that for all this time I had the wrong mentality But how could I believe this when nothin' good comes my way And if something does it'll be gone in a day It hurts knowin' my brother wishes I was never born Everyday I have to wake up and feel his scorn It's even worse because he wishes I'd die This really hurts deep inside of my mind This all seems like a really bad dream It just makes me want to scream The truth is that I'm awake I have to put what little I have at stake That's a little some thing I wrote a couple of weeks ago, I plan on finishing it soon Last edited by Godzilla : 07-19-2006 at 07:42 AM.

07-19-2006, 01:00 AM	#2 (permalink)
stringssing3 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Coral Springs, Florida Age: 18 Posts: 44 Points: 27.00 Bank: 291.36 Total Points: 318.36 Donate	Sounds very promising. I cant wait to read it when it is finished. Keep up the good work. ~Rep points!!!~ =]=] __________________ Eh. Im Guy. =]

07-21-2006, 09:50 AM	#4 (permalink)
stringssing3 Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Coral Springs, Florida Age: 18 Posts: 44 Points: 27.00 Bank: 291.36 Total Points: 318.36 Donate	of course you can. uh. just PM me or something. __________________ Eh. Im Guy. =]

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07-21-2006, 01:21 PM	#5 (permalink)
Melissa-Marie Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Trinidad and Tobago Age: 21 Posts: 114 Points: 34.49 Bank: 258.58 Total Points: 293.07 Donate	It sounds great, can't wait to read it when you're finished with it

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