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Ashlee · 10-10-2005, 08:55 PM

Wow Sparky 'Black sheep' is great! I can relate to it so well. I especially love the lines

i wait among the herd,
the lamb to the slaughter

I love your stuff keep it up

-Ashlee

Sparky · 10-30-2005, 01:30 PM

deleted.

the first one i just happened to come across in an old notebook the other day, and the second one was just written last night.

that is all.

Sparky · 11-05-2005, 04:47 PM

forgive the double post. i just wanted to update real quick.

deleted.

...done.

Justina_TheCat · 11-05-2005, 05:03 PM

I really liked this poem.
The ending really grabbed my attention, also. You've got some serious talent...may I steal some? Haha.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sparky

how do i wake
from this endless dream,
led by your hand...
a demonic entrapment,
a doorless existance
i cannot escape.

martinbq · 11-05-2005, 07:36 PM

wow, you have much talent, write very well, "Untitled", I like much, continues writing, congratulations

Sparky · 11-08-2005, 07:54 PM

thank you for the compliments.

deleted.

written yesterday afternoon/evening. in fact, i've been writing quite a lot lately, so keep an eye out for frequent updates.

that is all.

perfect ghost · 11-08-2005, 08:20 PM

I really loved your last one, I thought it was very well written!

Alana

Sparky · 11-12-2005, 04:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by perfect ghost

I really loved your last one, I thought it was very well written!

thank you very much.

deleted.

a bit shorter than my usual work, but still to the point.

Sparky · 11-16-2005, 05:04 PM

ignore the whole "haha, i double posted" thing. time for an update.

deleted.

'tis all for now. kthxlylbai.

Sparky · 11-27-2005, 04:31 PM

triple post. so shoot me.

deleted.

and i'm spent. enjoy.

10-10-2005, 08:55 PM	#21 (permalink)
Ashlee THATSWHATSHESAID Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Edward's meadow Age: 19 Posts: 2,757 Points: 10,417.47 Bank: 18,565.29 Total Points: 28,982.76 Donate	Wow Sparky 'Black sheep' is great! I can relate to it so well. I especially love the lines i wait among the herd, the lamb to the slaughter I love your stuff keep it up -Ashlee __________________ ♥

10-30-2005, 01:30 PM	#22 (permalink)
Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 18 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	deleted. the first one i just happened to come across in an old notebook the other day, and the second one was just written last night. that is all. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:18 PM.

11-05-2005, 04:47 PM	#23 (permalink)
Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 18 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	forgive the double post. i just wanted to update real quick. deleted. ...done. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:18 PM.

11-05-2005, 07:36 PM	#25 (permalink)
martinbq Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: peru Age: 19 Posts: 445 Points: 1,343.01 Bank: 1,684.05 Total Points: 3,027.05 Donate	wow, you have much talent, write very well, "Untitled", I like much, continues writing, congratulations __________________ Y a pesar de todo Me pregunto qué no di, Y al vivir me oculto Mis defectos para poder dormir.

11-08-2005, 07:54 PM	#26 (permalink)
Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 18 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	thank you for the compliments. deleted. written yesterday afternoon/evening. in fact, i've been writing quite a lot lately, so keep an eye out for frequent updates. that is all. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:19 PM.

11-08-2005, 08:20 PM	#27 (permalink)
perfect ghost Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Toronto,Ontario Age: 19 Posts: 737 Points: 1,929.93 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 1,929.93 Donate	I really loved your last one, I thought it was very well written! Alana __________________ Lock the last open door,my ghosts are gaining on me...

11-16-2005, 05:04 PM	#29 (permalink)
Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 18 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	ignore the whole "haha, i double posted" thing. time for an update. deleted. 'tis all for now. kthxlylbai. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:20 PM.

11-27-2005, 04:31 PM	#30 (permalink)
Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 18 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	triple post. so shoot me. deleted. and i'm spent. enjoy. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:21 PM.

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