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Ashlee · 11-27-2005, 04:42 PM

Sparky I love this new one, especially the lines

now voices whisper
from within the shadows,
a sad song at my ear.
angels crying in the distance.
there i stand, a mere memory.
then at long last, i wake.

<3

Sparky · 12-01-2005, 06:18 PM

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Originally Posted by AL_Immortal fan

Sparky I love this new one, especially the lines

now voices whisper
from within the shadows,
a sad song at my ear.
angels crying in the distance.
there i stand, a mere memory.
then at long last, i wake.

<3

thank you. i'm glad you liked it.

in regards to my latest works...the first of these two was actually quite difficult for me to write, as it is in fact based on a past personal experience.

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that's all for today.

Sparky · 12-06-2005, 04:27 PM

yet another double post...whee.

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written late Sunday night. in about five minutes. oh, what a shitty evening can do for inspiration.

perfect ghost · 12-07-2005, 07:11 PM

I really like this paragraph, I feel I have a common ground with it.. I especially like the last three lines,awsome. <3 Alana

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Originally Posted by Sparky

this boy, he sits hopeless
while no one hears
as he weeps gently,
and tears fall to trace
the outlines of his veins,
aching for the blade.

SoundOfSilence · 12-10-2005, 10:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Sparky

- Muse -

a dream...a beautiful secret.
questions forgotten
and thus redeemed.
content simply to see
as he stands beside her,
lost in her smile.

and he sees her
like he sees no other.
the world as it gleams
within her eyes,
it is she who defines
such beauty and grace.

without words to describe
what in him she creates,
he turns to the paper.
thinking of her,
his thoughts come to life.
and so are born the tales of a muse.

© Sparky

that's all for today.

i love the poem "muse". nice written, i like your style. dedicated to anyone special

<333

Sparky · 12-12-2005, 07:55 PM

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Originally Posted by SoundOfSilence

i love the poem "muse". nice written, i like your style. dedicated to anyone special

thank you very much. and yes...as a matter of fact, it is

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i love inspiration. i really do.

Sparky · 12-21-2005, 07:34 PM

...incoming.

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okay. i'm done now. i swear.

Sparky · 01-27-2006, 05:53 PM

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fuck 20 up the ass.

Shivercide · 01-30-2006, 11:51 PM

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- Wings -

for there lies no innocence
without truth.
and i am the first
though i smother the latter,
still you see through me
while others lay blind.

behind closed doors
and countless masks, i hid
with secrets
and laughing eyes
that turn to stone,
yet you never walked away.

and i am falling wingless,
one question ringing within.
will i rise above
or remain undefined,
bound by an invisible force
of the heart.

you know of me
what crumbling walls once held,
forbidden tales
of the same love
and thoughts, bold within
cannot be denied.

and before me you stand,
a symbolic presence.
reach into my heart of glass
and i am yours.
your love, your beauty,
my wings.

I really liked that one...it does speak of innocence - though there is a bit of beautiful contradiction in speaking of innocence and hiding the truth, when truth must come along with innocence. And yet it doesn't seem to diminish that innocence at all...in fact, it seems to pronounce it even more, as honesty seems to surround this poem. Or perhaps it's the one who sees through that who makes innocence reflect.

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- Fallen Angel -

this boy, he sits hopeless
while no one hears
as he weeps gently,
and tears fall to trace
the outlines of his veins,
aching for the blade.

with this blade, he cuts
through icy skin,
his faults begin to fade.
and this boy, he cries
for all that has been lost
as the bloodstained steel destroys him.

this hidden pain
kept so long within
now streaming from his eyes,
rivers in which he shall drown.
for it is this, his own truth
he cannot take.

and raindrops fall upon him,
as the sky begins to weep
for this boy, his love
and innocence gone.
this lifeless, fallen angel
now lay forever still.

That one really got to me; it made me cry. I can relate to it quite a bit. And that's all I can really say. I love it.

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- Song -

i hear the music somewhere.
a beautiful, tragic song.
it knows no direction.
no time. simply a melody.
rushing past the ear,
finding rest within the soul.

a rise and fall,
a crescendo of tears.
each note begins a tale.
and somewhere...
the author.
a silent conductor.

free your mind.
close your eyes.
open your heart.
and the song will never end.
now your voice will softly say,
"i hear the music somewhere."

I think that one is my favorite of yours...though I had a hard time choosing between this and the last one. I feel more free and open-minded just reading it, as if all chains of fact and "reality" have broken from around me.

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- Angel -

angel...your rose has bloomed to wilt,
and only thorns remain.
your halo has been tarnished.
somehow, you have been broken.
somehow, your wings have withered.
you soar to fall again.

catch your reflection in the rain.
who is this fading memory?
oceans of question in your eyes
along with hidden, wounded tears.
you hold an untouchable beauty
and an unspeakable worth.

no ears have heard your song,
but eyes have seen a broken myth.
what is spoken becomes what is real...
you cloud your truth in silence.
and inside, you weep
as you long to be found.

And that one is just unspeakably beautiful to me. It holds an ethereal quality, and a despairing sadness that makes it all the more beautiful.

Sparky, I wish I would have looked in your thread a long time ago. I see that you're a very talented writer, and your poems have appealed to me in a way that no writer has done for quite awhile.

Sparky · 02-12-2006, 05:52 PM

and after weeks of an agonizing creativity block...my words have finally returned.

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12-06-2005, 04:27 PM	#33 (permalink)
Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 17 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	yet another double post...whee. deleted. written late Sunday night. in about five minutes. oh, what a shitty evening can do for inspiration. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:22 PM.

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Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 17 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	...incoming. deleted. okay. i'm done now. i swear. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:24 PM.

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Sparky Sparkling in the Dark. Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Krypton. Age: 17 Posts: 1,158 Points: 2,259.43 Bank: 18,257.68 Total Points: 20,517.11 Donate	and after weeks of an agonizing creativity block...my words have finally returned. deleted. Last edited by Sparky : 06-06-2006 at 09:25 PM.

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Ashlee THATSWHATSHESAID Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Edward's meadow Age: 19 Posts: 2,757 Points: 10,417.47 Bank: 18,565.29 Total Points: 28,982.76 Donate	Sparky I love this new one, especially the lines now voices whisper from within the shadows, a sad song at my ear. angels crying in the distance. there i stand, a mere memory. then at long last, i wake. <3

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