BlackWolf RavenStar

So I figured I'd post some of my writtings here and see
what you guy think

This first one is called Sweet Darkness


I do not fear the darkness,

It has always been my friend,

Since the beginning of time to the very end,

I cannot fear the demons in my mind,

They can't control me nor make me cry,

I keep thinking when my wounds will mend,

And how happy I will be then,

I will not fear chaos for it is a part of living,

And I can not fear chaos winning,

I need to gain control over my thoughts and pain,

I can not keep sulking in the rain,

My heart it yerns to be freed,

Sweet darkness take me away from all the hatred and greed

And give me all that I need,

Darkness is a friend to you for all of time,

From the day you're born to the day you die.


I'll post more later

francis4864

The poem cooks.
At this stage i recomend solving money problems so u have some food daily and maybe cigarettes, then do nothing else.
I know my advice cooks, yes or no? (you can write back), i play metal guitar and keep track of amazing Amy Lee.
Sincerely,
Francis

BlackWolf RavenStar

Um...........what?

francis4864

post me a subject for u and me to discuss.

blood&chocolate

Thats really good!

francis4864

OKz, if i was a mystic i could say darkness can take you away from everything because there is nothing in it, in the case problems total your life (everybody say that) then it becomes your best friend (nothing in it). Would someone try to meet me somewhere on earth?, Amy Lee Drown obviously doesn't contact me and my analysis has been outstanding.

BlackWolf RavenStar

Ah I"m starting to understanf you now


Thanks





Here's a new one,


(verse one)

Look at all the mess we caused,
man what a disaster. All this fighting
on and on will only cause us to fall faster.
Now the both of us have accepted the blame.
We're letting the rain, put out the burning flame.





(chorus)
Here we stand for the final time matches in hand
getting ready to strike them. Counting second
like grains of sand.We're ready to burn the bridge
we made out of our rage.



(verse two)

Can't remember why things went downhill.
Or why we started exchanging words that were cold
and ill. Mistakes, yeah we learnd from our mistakes.
Never again will we cause eachother so much pain.






(chorus)
Here we stand for the final time matches in hand
getting ready to strike them. Counting seconds
like grains of sand.We're ready to burn the bridge
we made out of our rage.


(chorus/bridge)
Here we stand for the final time guns in hand,
getting ready to load them. Counting seconds
like grains of sand. The feud will die within the
shadowy figures. Pointing the guns at ourselves
and pulling the trigger-.


(chorus)
Here we stand for the final time matches in hand
getting ready to strike them. Counting seconds
like grains of sand.We're ready to burn the bridge
we made out of our rage.


(outro)
The poison has finnally finished bleeding
from our veins. Now we can get back to normal
again.

francis4864

Okx, this deal of replied with a quote of the other don't know much, fffffffiiiiiiiiiiiiiuuuuuuuuuiiiiiiiiiiiiii, maying the force maybe be with me, or letting it let being with me, consulting yoda definitely better than c3po.
Let it be
Let it be
Let it be
Let it be
I forgot the rest

BlackWolf RavenStar

You lost me

francis4864

I wonder if the following short poem is ok:

If Christmas were no good
and you turn around and see a computer
could mean the road is long
full of wisdom and “want to be” boomers