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12-31-2004, 06:23 AM
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n00blet
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Malaysia
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Sweet Tinted Glass
Sweet Tinted Glass
Have you forgotten all about me? I',m the girl in the sweet tinted glass You let me out of my misery Now I'm back to haunt you with yours I saw you through the sweet tinted glass Your angelic face smiling back at me I should have know it was all a lie Now you've left me in misery Liar, Whore, Thief, Bitch I should have known you'd do that to me Bitch, Thief, Whore Liar I'm crying out loud and nobody's here How could such a perfect face? Cause so much pain?? I should have known that You'd be cold as porcelain Have you forgotten about me? I'm the girl in the sweet tinted glass You led me out of my misery Now I'm back to haunt you with urs You won't bring me down (this time) I'll make you drown (this time) Not a sound to be heard (this time) As you fall down...(this time) Shards Of Me I've been broken again Each time harder I try to pull myself together Not succeding You caused all this All this unhappiness All the lies you told me before Now I'm not happy anymore. You've broken me into shards You've put me back together again I never know when this'll end Cause it's just..shards of me... |
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12-31-2004, 10:28 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Somewhere on earth
Age: 19
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With "shards of me" I don't know but I think it needs something more. But it's also cute tho. 
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12-31-2004, 11:22 AM
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Sweet Tinted Glass Post #3 (permalink) |
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: On the Boulavard of Broken Dreams
Age: 19
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i really like sweet tinted glass...i liked the line you took away my misery and now i'm haunting you with yours...the second one is good, but i think u should add some more to it because it seems somewhat incomplete...but your writing is good, keep it up! God bless
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