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Fairy.org · 12-18-2003, 01:42 PM

Your words touch me :heart:

**Kaydee** · 12-18-2003, 03:22 PM

you know what i like, I love you word choices and where you place them is perfectly... Good job~

SangReal · 12-18-2003, 04:16 PM

Somewhere inside lies a little girl
With no weapon to fend off the men of the world
Rocking and crying, curled into a ball
And I wish that I could just erase it all

So much hate and so much pain
(Without it, would you be the same?)
But with that pain, he kindled a fire
Without escape, and that is why I desire

To separate the petals of your mind
To set up house, and live inside,
To take that little girl into my loving arms
And gently protect her from any harm.

Violated, desiccated,
Yet wetter with tears than the wishing well
The man who did this thing to you
Will reap his reward in a burning hell.

Cry on my shoulder, close to my heart
And I won't let the pursuing demons tear you apart
With perfect trust, and with perfect love,
And with the grace of God, it will be enough.

Fairy.org · 12-18-2003, 04:23 PM

Thank You, I really love ya.. You now know more about me than one single person in my life, and You don't even know it all.. <3 It means a lot that you would even listen.. Thank You for keeping my secret.

**Kaydee** · 12-18-2003, 04:36 PM

WOW~ They just keep getting better, Its nice to have a new poet around here. Some what refreshing~

SangReal · 12-29-2003, 02:07 PM

Girl my age
All the rage
Shiver in the night
His delight

Her arms scarred from all the tries
His heart scarred by the very same knife
Wielded in her hand, COMPLACENCY
His with her and hers with he

What she will not ever know
Is just how far that man would go
To see her captured totally
Joyfully, if temporarily

But now she is completely lost
The cold world has left her all alone
For she is gone from him,
But he is her home.

Fairy.org · 12-29-2003, 02:13 PM

For some reason that made me cry. I made my home In Nate.. thinking we would be together for years to come. Through thick and thin. But the more and more I know.. I made my home in something that will never be. well.. never say never I guess.
Beautifully done.

SangReal · 12-31-2003, 03:25 PM

A bit goofy, and bad poetry, I admit...but whatever. I don't do it for it to be good. I do it in response to my feelings.

JEREMIAH
Brown was a bullfrog
Or at least as full of bull as one
Lies all the time
And so contrived
He missed the most important thing

Oh breaker of the Golden Rule
You lied; now I’m lying by the pool
Thinking of the man I didn’t know
And thought I loved, my hands
Shattered, shaking like broken glass,
As they stroke the flowing water of redemption,
Beautiful palms, shielded from the glaring sun
That will never again deign to touch
His face, which has suddenly become repugnant,
Uncovered by the light of truth

Fairy.org · 01-02-2004, 08:31 PM

I love that, You write so beautifully. and, so well

I hope I didnt scare you away, when I told you my secret. Sorry.

music box · 01-02-2004, 08:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LittleFairydotORG

Your words touch me :heart:

Me too. Wow, I can really relate and see what your feeling great poetry, I'm looking forward to seeing more.

12-18-2003, 03:22 PM	#12 (permalink)
Kaydee Mommy 2 Be !! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Chesapeake, VA Age: 27 Posts: 1,547 Points: 6,703.75 Bank: 112,708.65 Total Points: 119,412.40 Donate	you know what i like, I love you word choices and where you place them is perfectly... Good job~ __________________ Space for rent!

12-18-2003, 04:16 PM	#13 (permalink)
SangReal Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: In Love Age: 24 Posts: 631 Points: 1,504.89 Bank: 21,023.62 Total Points: 22,528.51 Donate	Dilia Somewhere inside lies a little girl With no weapon to fend off the men of the world Rocking and crying, curled into a ball And I wish that I could just erase it all So much hate and so much pain (Without it, would you be the same?) But with that pain, he kindled a fire Without escape, and that is why I desire To separate the petals of your mind To set up house, and live inside, To take that little girl into my loving arms And gently protect her from any harm. Violated, desiccated, Yet wetter with tears than the wishing well The man who did this thing to you Will reap his reward in a burning hell. Cry on my shoulder, close to my heart And I won't let the pursuing demons tear you apart With perfect trust, and with perfect love, And with the grace of God, it will be enough. Last edited by SangReal : 04-30-2004 at 11:55 AM.

12-18-2003, 04:36 PM	#15 (permalink)
Kaydee Mommy 2 Be !! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Chesapeake, VA Age: 27 Posts: 1,547 Points: 6,703.75 Bank: 112,708.65 Total Points: 119,412.40 Donate	WOW~ They just keep getting better, Its nice to have a new poet around here. Some what refreshing~ __________________ Space for rent!

12-31-2003, 03:25 PM	#18 (permalink)
SangReal Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: In Love Age: 24 Posts: 631 Points: 1,504.89 Bank: 21,023.62 Total Points: 22,528.51 Donate	for Omi... A bit goofy, and bad poetry, I admit...but whatever. I don't do it for it to be good. I do it in response to my feelings. JEREMIAH Brown was a bullfrog Or at least as full of bull as one Lies all the time And so contrived He missed the most important thing Oh breaker of the Golden Rule You lied; now I’m lying by the pool Thinking of the man I didn’t know And thought I loved, my hands Shattered, shaking like broken glass, As they stroke the flowing water of redemption, Beautiful palms, shielded from the glaring sun That will never again deign to touch His face, which has suddenly become repugnant, Uncovered by the light of truth

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12-18-2003, 01:42 PM	#11 (permalink)
Fairy.org Member of the Banned PERMA BANNED Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: In Brandon's bed. Age: 22 Posts: 738 Points: 286.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 286.00 Donate	Your words touch me :heart:

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Fairy.org Member of the Banned PERMA BANNED Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: In Brandon's bed. Age: 22 Posts: 738 Points: 286.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 286.00 Donate	Thank You, I really love ya.. You now know more about me than one single person in my life, and You don't even know it all.. <3 It means a lot that you would even listen.. Thank You for keeping my secret.

12-29-2003, 02:07 PM	#16 (permalink)
SangReal Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: In Love Age: 24 Posts: 631 Points: 1,504.89 Bank: 21,023.62 Total Points: 22,528.51 Donate	Girl my age All the rage Shiver in the night His delight Her arms scarred from all the tries His heart scarred by the very same knife Wielded in her hand, COMPLACENCY His with her and hers with he What she will not ever know Is just how far that man would go To see her captured totally Joyfully, if temporarily But now she is completely lost The cold world has left her all alone For she is gone from him, But he is her home.

12-29-2003, 02:13 PM	#17 (permalink)
Fairy.org Member of the Banned PERMA BANNED Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: In Brandon's bed. Age: 22 Posts: 738 Points: 286.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 286.00 Donate	For some reason that made me cry. I made my home In Nate.. thinking we would be together for years to come. Through thick and thin. But the more and more I know.. I made my home in something that will never be. well.. never say never I guess. Beautifully done.

01-02-2004, 08:31 PM	#19 (permalink)
Fairy.org Member of the Banned PERMA BANNED Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: In Brandon's bed. Age: 22 Posts: 738 Points: 286.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 286.00 Donate	I love that, You write so beautifully. and, so well I hope I didnt scare you away, when I told you my secret. Sorry.

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