|01-10-2005, 06:01 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #1|
The works of darksentinel
Darksentinel, yep that's me
I write all sorts of stuff...stories, songs, poems, websites, programs etc... and I'll post some of it here
I love feedback!
|01-10-2005, 06:12 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #2|
Okay, my first piece: this is something i wrote while I was angry at something (you can probably tell that from reading it lol)...once I find a good tune, I'll turn it into a song...(if you've got an original tune that you think would fit it, I'd love to hear from you). It is an anti-war song, and if it ever gets anywhere I'd like to dedicate it to all those who have suffered from the actions of people whose irresponsible hands hold the reigns of power.
Despair (working title)
You brainwashed us with honeyed lies
Till you had power and we were bound
Incarcerated those who saw the truth
Before they could make a sound
You sowed the seeds of hatred
And reaped the crop of war
You blamed all wrongs on God and Fate
And acted under 'right' and 'law'
You took away our innocence
And drowned it in our blood
You sent us off to die for you
Neck deep in foreign mud
You ripped our daily lives to shreds
Damnation in the name of peace
Tore us from the homes we knew
Killed us for fake democracy
|01-10-2005, 06:33 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #3|
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Really powerfull and you can tell the anger from reading.
Good job! keep posting more.
|01-10-2005, 06:41 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #4|
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Loved the song, great rythem.
|01-10-2005, 07:16 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #5|
Last edited by darksentinel : 01-10-2005 at 07:38 PM
|01-10-2005, 07:17 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #6|
glad you guys liked that, so im gonna post another one in the same vein, a bit older though...and no this is not all that I write...
'The Foulest of People' (Working Title)
We need a revolution
We need a change of system
No cause for celebration
We need a change of system
with different governing bodies
billions of lifetimes
and we call this democracy?
We have freedom of choice
yet our choices are made
by people who only care
for power and trade
The cleansing fires of change
must be brought to reality
to uplift this oppression
and end this anarchy
we may be the foulest of people
yet life we do crave
between the rigours of birth
and the silence of the grave
mindless conformist consumers
clinging to routine lifestyles
treading paths made by other people
and paved with black and white tiles
result from conflicting interests
by antisocial terrorists
internal collapse of society
crushed by it's own weight
fuelled by rampant desires
racism, unfairness, hate
can you honestly say
that you have our best interests at heart
dear rulers if you do
now might be the perfect time to start
Last edited by darksentinel : 01-10-2005 at 07:39 PM
|01-10-2005, 07:35 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #7|
okay everyone needs a love-based song lol, can't be anti-system all the time ...the first verse goes well with the tune to Pink Floyd's The Wall:
i want to put my arms around her
lock her in my memory
a moment with just both of us
make her just a part of me
every last exquisite detail
of flawless unmatched pure beauty
perfection in an imperfect world!
that world is lightless without thee
oh, it was never to be
our paths were split hopelessly
yet dreams will never die
even when all my tears have been cried
my dreams will always be
dreams of you and me
all alone in the dark
with the lament of my tormented heart
why coulnd't we be together?
just you and me, forever!
yet one small thing remained true
that doomed us from the start
i wasn't good enough for you
flawed in all but heart
|01-13-2005, 10:19 PM||The works of darksentinel Post #8|
The hate, the anger
The pent-up frustration
A volcano of chaos
Behind the calm demeanour
Shown to the world
The silent screams
The blood, the pain
The steel against flesh
Anything to prevent
The turmoil and confusion
And the pain deeper than any blade can cut
Emptiness and loneliness
Of not being understood
Tears shed in the safety of darkness
The pounding blood in ears
Yet by morning
The tears have dried
The wounds have scarred
The mask of contentment replaced
And noone questions
Why on a summer's day
You were a long-sleeved shirt to school
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