This Thread Is A Happy Thread!

Selfish&Cold · 01-15-2006, 06:27 AM

This is some of my stuff. None of it is deppressing or moody. It seems like we could use some happiness in this forum! I hope you all enjoy. Feel free to comment. It is in fact a free country after all.

There you go
Surging through my veins
Igniting my soul
I feel like my heart could burst
Pure emotion
That is what you are
How did I find you?
I think God was smiling at me that day
He sent me an Angel
Your beauty blinds me
And robs me of my breath
I love you, you know
Especially when you smile
You could fix my whole world with that smile
Come close to me baby
I want to touch your face
I love how your skin feels beneath my fingertips
Can you feel that?
As our lips lock in an eternal kiss
I have found my heaven
You...

Selfish&Cold · 01-15-2006, 06:33 AM

This one is a rhyming poem

"Between The Both Of Us"
Innocent beauty
Passionate lust
Such a heartfelt feeling
Between the both of us
Love so pure
Love so strong
The love we share
Could never be wrong
Devoted to freindship
Concrete with trust
Such an honest feeling
Between the both of us
An innocent begginning
A future so vast
Alove so unexpected
It happened so fast
Nothing can change it
Or tear us apart
Such a beautiful feeling
Between both of our hearts.

chii_chan · 01-15-2006, 07:58 AM

Oh wow I love them! I think you are right about the needing happiness! Very beautiful poems I love them, they talk aout love so freely so truly it seems as though I while I read it feel it! Very wonderful stuff!

Carmen · 01-15-2006, 08:32 AM

That's some awesome stuff. Keep up the lovely work

Captain Cookie · 01-15-2006, 09:38 AM

I loved both of the poems, especially the second one

it will stay in my mind for a while I think, and it's really good with the way you wrote it, the words you chose and I just really like it

Heaven.queen · 01-15-2006, 10:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AngelofSolitude

This one is a rhyming poem

"Between The Both Of Us"
Innocent beauty
Passionate lust
Such a heartfelt feeling
Between the both of us
Love so pure
Love so strong
The love we share
Could never be wrong
Devoted to freindship
Concrete with trust
Such an honest feeling
Between the both of us
An innocent begginning
A future so vast
Alove so unexpected
It happened so fast
Nothing can change it
Or tear us apart
Such a beautiful feeling
Between both of our hearts.

This remaind me to nightwish! great work!

Enemy · 01-15-2006, 02:34 PM

it's pretty difficult writting happy stuff, but you pretty much nailed it...GOOD JOB!!

Selfish&Cold · 01-16-2006, 12:28 AM

The moonlight smiles
As it touches your skin
Caressing every inch
Cradling you in its beam
Your beauty shines
Brighter than any star
You are my star
My guiding light
I would follow you anywhere
Such a beautiful night
You are intoxicating
Perhaps I'm drunk from love
Our love
I could never love another
You were made for me
My nighttime princess

Selfish&Cold · 01-16-2006, 12:47 AM

I woke up this morning
And I felt alive
I couldn't help but smile
As I opened up my eyes
There you are baby
Laying right next to me
Lost in the comfort
Of peaceful dreams
You look like an Angel
With hair all over the place
I am thankful for these moments
I would never give them up
I love you beautiful girl
I hope its always enough

Rest baby
Close your eyes
When you wake in the morning
I will be by your side
I'll never leave you
I don't know how
You have built my entire world
I'll never tear it down
You are my savouir
My one true love
You didn't walk away
When times got rough
You stood by me
You stood so tall
You were right there
Through it all
Rest baby
Close your eyes
I'll be right here
For the rest of your life

Svetlana-S.V.D. · 01-16-2006, 07:01 AM

Your poem are incredibly beautiful! I can't wait of reading some more if your "happy" stuff... you know, they comfort me!

01-15-2006, 06:27 AM	This Thread Is A Happy Thread! Post #1
Selfish&Cold wet-willied Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In a pineapple under the sea! Age: 29 Posts: 2,480 Points: 13,583,618.29 Bank: 235,612.46 Total Points: 13,819,230.74 Donate	This Thread Is A Happy Thread! This is some of my stuff. None of it is deppressing or moody. It seems like we could use some happiness in this forum! I hope you all enjoy. Feel free to comment. It is in fact a free country after all. There you go Surging through my veins Igniting my soul I feel like my heart could burst Pure emotion That is what you are How did I find you? I think God was smiling at me that day He sent me an Angel Your beauty blinds me And robs me of my breath I love you, you know Especially when you smile You could fix my whole world with that smile Come close to me baby I want to touch your face I love how your skin feels beneath my fingertips Can you feel that? As our lips lock in an eternal kiss I have found my heaven You... Last edited by Selfish&Cold : 01-16-2006 at 12:17 AM

01-16-2006, 12:47 AM	This Thread Is A Happy Thread! Post #9
Selfish&Cold wet-willied Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In a pineapple under the sea! Age: 29 Posts: 2,480 Points: 13,583,618.29 Bank: 235,612.46 Total Points: 13,819,230.74 Donate	I woke up this morning And I felt alive I couldn't help but smile As I opened up my eyes There you are baby Laying right next to me Lost in the comfort Of peaceful dreams You look like an Angel With hair all over the place I am thankful for these moments I would never give them up I love you beautiful girl I hope its always enough Rest baby Close your eyes When you wake in the morning I will be by your side I'll never leave you I don't know how You have built my entire world I'll never tear it down You are my savouir My one true love You didn't walk away When times got rough You stood by me You stood so tall You were right there Through it all Rest baby Close your eyes I'll be right here For the rest of your life Last edited by Selfish&Cold : 01-16-2006 at 07:19 AM

01-16-2006, 07:01 AM	This Thread Is A Happy Thread! Post #10
Svetlana-S.V.D. Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Ukraine Age: 28 Posts: 147 Points: 2,109.56 Bank: 607.13 Total Points: 2,716.69 Donate	beautiful! Your poem are incredibly beautiful! I can't wait of reading some more if your "happy" stuff... you know, they comfort me!

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Selfish&Cold wet-willied Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In a pineapple under the sea! Age: 29 Posts: 2,480 Points: 13,583,618.29 Bank: 235,612.46 Total Points: 13,819,230.74 Donate	This one is a rhyming poem "Between The Both Of Us" Innocent beauty Passionate lust Such a heartfelt feeling Between the both of us Love so pure Love so strong The love we share Could never be wrong Devoted to freindship Concrete with trust Such an honest feeling Between the both of us An innocent begginning A future so vast Alove so unexpected It happened so fast Nothing can change it Or tear us apart Such a beautiful feeling Between both of our hearts.

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chii_chan Registered User Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: At the Roxy with Danny Satan Age: 21 Posts: 825 Points: 6,811.06 Bank: 4,828.95 Total Points: 11,640.01 Donate	Oh wow I love them! I think you are right about the needing happiness! Very beautiful poems I love them, they talk aout love so freely so truly it seems as though I while I read it feel it! Very wonderful stuff!

01-15-2006, 08:32 AM	This Thread Is A Happy Thread! Post #4
Carmen Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: England Age: 25 Posts: 1,789 Points: 12,392.57 Bank: 26,245.21 Total Points: 38,637.78 Donate	That's some awesome stuff. Keep up the lovely work

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Captain Cookie Yes, "Captain Cookie"! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Somewhere Age: 23 Posts: 1,878 Points: 1,627.87 Bank: 25,500.90 Total Points: 27,128.77 Donate	I loved both of the poems, especially the second one it will stay in my mind for a while I think, and it's really good with the way you wrote it, the words you chose and I just really like it

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Enemy I'm no different Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: There, There Age: 23 Posts: 927 Points: 5,701.11 Bank: 21,668.84 Total Points: 27,369.95 Donate	it's pretty difficult writting happy stuff, but you pretty much nailed it...GOOD JOB!!

01-16-2006, 12:28 AM	This Thread Is A Happy Thread! Post #8
Selfish&Cold wet-willied Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: In a pineapple under the sea! Age: 29 Posts: 2,480 Points: 13,583,618.29 Bank: 235,612.46 Total Points: 13,819,230.74 Donate	The moonlight smiles As it touches your skin Caressing every inch Cradling you in its beam Your beauty shines Brighter than any star You are my star My guiding light I would follow you anywhere Such a beautiful night You are intoxicating Perhaps I'm drunk from love Our love I could never love another You were made for me My nighttime princess

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