These are good work you've done. My favorate is ' Dark Beauty'.

Thanks everyone. I always appreciate feedback. I just have one to add today, it's my newest and I'm fairly proud of it, so again any feedback is great you guys. Thank you so much.

Marionette
Marionette
Please cry again
We don't want your strings of tears to weaken
Pretty puppet
You're so hollow
So easy to break, as everyone will know

In my own mind
This marionette has her soul
And can live her own life
But I feel a pull in the strings
Pulling her down the rabbit hole
Back into reality

Marionette
Please cry again
We don't want your strings of tears to weaken
Pretty puppet
You're so hollow
So easy to break, as everyone will know

In my own fantasy
this marionette can feel
the strings aren't a part of me
But I still can't break free
Because my world isn't real
And no one cares about what they don't want to see

Marionette
Please cry again
We don't want your strings of tears to weaken
Pretty puppet
You're so hollow
So easy to break, as everyone will know

Marionette
I'm sorry the strings are still here
Curled around the fingers of your every fear
Pretty puppet
I can't set you free
Cause you're just another reflection of me

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"I think I am in Hell, therefore I am there." - The Poet Jean-Nicholas Arthur Rimbaud
"I always knew I would look back on my crying and laugh, but I never thought I would look back on my laughter and cry." - Author Unknown

'So many words with little meaning
You can't hear my cry'

Sometimes happened to me that I didn' t find another person to talk.
Maybe is common nowadays that everyone is speaking but nobody is listening to.
In fact, when I can' t talk... well I use to write: and that' s one of the reasons of my membership here.

Keep writing and posting... I repeat: your lines are huge!