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Old 12-25-2004, 04:20 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Dance To The Step

Emotions overflowing me,
Beat of the drum grooving the steps
Going in motion, together in beat

Sweat intermixed, light's on us
We're focused on the step,
Together in motion

Flecks of light are shining on us,
Dancing the night away
Dance to the step

The adrenaline's pumping,
No overcoming of tiredness
Only enthusiasm & energy
Dancing to the step

12/3/2004
_________
Here I Am

So here I am, sitting on the floor,
Writing in this cheap notebook,
Barfing my thoughts away.

I don’t know why I do this, so
Here I am, listening to people,
Speaking their thoughts, while here
I am, writing in the corner, in my
Place.

But then, my surroundings change, and
Here I am, sitting at my desk in math,
Listening about monomials, drowning
Them into my brain, writing them into another cheap notebook.

And then, here I am, back again, back
Into the corner, writing my thoughts
Away. And to think, it was all
Because I bought this cheap notebook.

12/9/2004
________


AND NOW, to lighten the mood:

Ode to my Barf-Colored Gum

It was once a piece of watermelon gum
Now it’s a color of putrid green
Moon, spoon, loon, groom, tomb, womb.
the end.

12/16/2004

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Old 12-25-2004, 07:57 PM   #12 (permalink)
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You're My Friend

You say you're a friend, & I trust you, until you make me go down the drain, losing my mind, shattered to pieces by the ones I thought I could trust, but I was wrong... you were my friend, but now you're my enemy I hate you, get out of my life. You make me wanna scream...

Shoes & shirts please, you're breaking my rules, but now it's my turn to break yours.


12/3/2004
________
F__k You (Forget You)

You rocked my world
You made me smile
I wanted you badly
But you rejected me

You make me wanna die
But I get over you
And I Wanna Tell You
F__k You (Forget You)

You self-conscious whore
You think you're better than everyone
I can't believe I wanted you
You make me wanna shut you up

F__k You (Forget You)
How Could You be like that?
I never wanna see you face ever again
::fade with chorus::
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Wall
NOTE: Uncompleted Poem

I used to be behind this wall,
(That was standing proud & tall.)
This problem is digging into me
(And I just bed it to let me be.)

Chorus:
This wall is blocking my feelings,
Controlling my wheeling & dealing,
Not letting me do what I want to do.
It’s making me… breaking me… I’m screwed…

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Old 12-26-2004, 02:17 AM   #13 (permalink)
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very raw poems oaysis...good stuff.
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Old 01-03-2005, 05:29 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Regret

I was stupid when I did this,
I can’t believe I fell into the pit,
Loss of my control
And I’m feeling so bad.

It’s all over, and my wounds start to heal,
But I’m still haunted by the vision of
You, and it kills me, every single night.

There’s a little word that’s all over my face
And it’s exposing me now. It’s called
Regret.
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Old 01-03-2005, 05:35 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Good poem, the last stanza is my favorite one.
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Old 01-03-2005, 05:42 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Thank you very, very much. Unfortunately, nothing new to dish out, due to Winter Break ended, along with my inspiration. But don't worry, it'll come back in, oh, one year, give or take.
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OK, as I said before, no inspiration lately. But then, I had an ounce of it. Even though it has some pretty bad rhyming, I tried.

Tsunami

Dead bodies scattered like rag dolls,
People unable to hear victim's calls.
Grieving mother cries for her child,
The waves of the ocean crash with wild

Rage. Temperature rising, sun glowing,
The sight of cities once seen, now not showing.
Orphans running, calling for love,
But the hope is gona, and the sun above

Is shining, shining, and the water isn't leaving,
And the people need relief, but the waves are upheaving,
Until they come and bring paradise to help,
Filling needs & wants, and changing the cards they were dealt.

But the damage is still there,
The clothes on their backs they wear
for the past few days, dealing with sorrow
and the help they borrow

Starts a new day to change,
to make anew & arrange.
But one step at a time will get them through,
Until what they see is a clear view.

~In Dedication to the Victims of the Tsunami - December 26, 2004~
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Ooh most things gone. Oh well, not a HUGE deal, and I think/ hope I saved the things I typed in this thread. Eh, I lose things. I deal.

Untitled
Eraser marks on the paper show
Those Lackluster Dreams
You once had.

Markings on the Wall
Scratched out by the jaw of
Naiveté.

See those empty spaces
That are filling with Drawback Hope?

Those Technicolor graves
Say You Name in
Black & White, waiting for
You to attend their cemetery function
Yeah...join the fun...

Washed down lies keep you alive
But the reality of the truth haunts you
Forever.
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Blinded
Blinded by the light, we all can’t see the truth
You say that I’ve always lied about everything
But I can’t see why you’re not listening
Can’t you tell that it is all a lie?

You think that you have right stuff
And we all know you got enough
But isn’t it time for you to change?
I know you think I’m always wrong
But I have the integrity to know what’s right (& what’s wrong)

It’s all blinded you, with everything they say
You take in like you’re a miser of deceit
You will not change, when there’s other things to seize
Please listen to the words that I say when I tell you

Don’t be so one-faced, please open up your eyes
Watch your surroundings and see them blend
I know you’re capable of changing your ways to see
Don’t burden yourself with the pain & misfortune
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the mighty, aka emo song #1

Your tears meet mine
Our love buries time
We were the pair
But the pain's too much to bear

Your touch is smooth
The kiss is bliss
But the way you move
Is the thing I really miss

The stars are bright
We're both filled with life
You always had me, you could just find me
But that was the past, when you could see

The pain
The love
The times we shared...

Your touch is smooth
The kiss is bliss
But the way you move
Is the thing I really miss

Just look out into the horizon
Come and join the liaison
Bring down your walls
The mighty all...fall...
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