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ageofourlies · 06-28-2006, 06:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Oayis

Memory

In visions of the dark night,
I have woken to remember.
That I have heard the trill of a bird,
A bird that is my memory.

In naps under the lazy sun,
I have dreamt about the bird,
Which ate the helpless worm,
A worm that was my conscience.

And in the end, the bird flies away,
The sun rises & moon sets,
To which we learn one thing:
The memory gets the conscience
in the end.

WOW! that was great. a beautiful poem. you are really talented with your writing!

FelicityS · 06-28-2006, 08:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oayis

Up and down.
Your eyes watch the event.
Left and right.
Pigments blotch the parchment.

You store your masterpiece into your mind.
It dwells, fresh and refined.

Then comes the night
Taken by the fires--
The fires that shatter your masterpiece.
Ruining the view admired.

Then comes the sun
The fear subsides
For you see another masterpiece
Blossoming around you.

A neverending process.

(I gotta say that this was really streched.)

Wow i love this peice, very unique and imaginative!
I like all of your pictures too!

myimmortalenemy · 06-29-2006, 02:03 AM

Your sketches remind me of my own attempts. I have the worst time trying to get the nose and lips to coordinate.

As for your poems, well they're wonderful! I love how short they are, but they get the message through. I also like how you write poetry about everyday things in life.

Keep it up!

Oayis · 09-06-2006, 11:45 PM

Pacific

Visionary idea
Of a human utopia
Hopeful dreaming
In order to live a pacific life

Rebuilding civilization
For those to remember pacific memories
To stop the suffocating of future ideas
From the depths of the aggressive present

Destroying religion & politics
In order to create a pacific will
To end the control of a world
That decides how to live

But the utopia that will be
Never was in the first place
An idea that fell to pieces
Because the idea was suffocated.

Oayis · 08-31-2007, 02:16 PM

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09-06-2006, 11:45 PM	#74 (permalink)
Oayis Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Philly, yo. Age: 18 Posts: 1,493 Points: 1,750.00 Bank: 318,072.66 Total Points: 319,822.66 Donate	Pacific Visionary idea Of a human utopia Hopeful dreaming In order to live a pacific life Rebuilding civilization For those to remember pacific memories To stop the suffocating of future ideas From the depths of the aggressive present Destroying religion & politics In order to create a pacific will To end the control of a world That decides how to live But the utopia that will be Never was in the first place An idea that fell to pieces Because the idea was suffocated. __________________ s i y a o Sucka.

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myimmortalenemy Sex Muffin Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: There, There Age: 19 Posts: 887 Points: 1,302.53 Bank: 13,504.11 Total Points: 14,806.64 Donate	Your sketches remind me of my own attempts. I have the worst time trying to get the nose and lips to coordinate. As for your poems, well they're wonderful! I love how short they are, but they get the message through. I also like how you write poetry about everyday things in life. Keep it up!

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