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Ashlee · 03-02-2006, 11:31 PM

Absolutely beautiful, I love it

Leanne · 03-03-2006, 03:23 AM

Quote:

i quit
this world has turned it's back on me
i'm nothing but a muse
everyone wants something from me
i'm nothing but used
i look for daylight
but all i see is black
my wings are torn and tattered
what's left of my heart is all but shattered
i take these pills one by one
then i go and kiss my little one
i pull her close to me and cry
for this will be my last goodnight
i quit

This one is great. I liek how you repeated the "I quit" at the end too. I know a lot of people can relate to this one. Awesome

Wildangel · 03-03-2006, 07:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leanne

This one is great. I liek how you repeated the "I quit" at the end too. I know a lot of people can relate to this one. Awesome

Thanks Leanne. That poem was really easy to write. But for me, it is very difficult to read. I didn't really realize I was feeling that way. I had alot of things going on. And it seemed alot of things dumped on me at once.

Thanks Ashlee. honestly Amy did all the work. All I did was take the photograph and add some text over it. If it wasn't for her picture, i doubt it would have turned out the way it did

Ashlee · 03-03-2006, 08:02 AM

I see what you mean, this poem is rather emotionally draining to read. These lines in-particular really get to me

Quote:

Originally Posted by TatersMomma

i take these pills one by one
then i go and kiss my little one
i pull her close to me and cry
for this will be my last goodnight
i quit

beautifully written none-the-less

<3

Wildangel · 03-03-2006, 08:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ashlee

I see what you mean, this poem is rather emotionally draining to read. These lines in-particular really get to me

beautifully written none-the-less

<3

Suicide isn't something that I could ever imagine doing. Life is just so precious. But sometimes, it seems it would be so easy, just to say i quit.

Wildangel · 03-16-2006, 10:32 PM

something new i wrote. the issue of death has come more than i'd like lately.

i saw you crying
it didn't seem to ease your pain
i put my arms around you
and gave you reassurance
everything would be ok
you looked up at me
i saw you smile
but the pain was still evident
he's lost to you but you will grow stronger
the life you shared
will go on
even if only in your heart and mind
a soul is lost but
what's in your heart will last forever

Solitude awakens me to the reality that you're gone

perfect ghost · 03-17-2006, 12:05 PM

First off, I thought it was nicely written... And that I totally agree with what you are saying, suicide is the easy way out. It is so easy to say that you want to get away from it all and just let go but it makes you so much stronger to work through everything.

Also, I feel the same way with what I write sometimes. It's so much easier to write something sad, then read it. Sometimes I will write something and not read it until months later, and sometimes it's very hard to accept the feelings you see written on the paper.

Anyways, I enjoyed reading what you had to say. Hope to see more soon.

-Alana

Quote:

Originally Posted by TatersMomma

Suicide isn't something that I could ever imagine doing. Life is just so precious. But sometimes, it seems it would be so easy, just to say i quit.

Wildangel · 03-18-2006, 08:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by perfect ghost

First off, I thought it was nicely written... And that I totally agree with what you are saying, suicide is the easy way out. It is so easy to say that you want to get away from it all and just let go but it makes you so much stronger to work through everything.

Also, I feel the same way with what I write sometimes. It's so much easier to write something sad, then read it. Sometimes I will write something and not read it until months later, and sometimes it's very hard to accept the feelings you see written on the paper.

Anyways, I enjoyed reading what you had to say. Hope to see more soon.

-Alana

Thanks Alana. I'm still fairly new at writing. I think when I was younger I always tried to write the way the teacher said we should. So I got used to that pattern and never really explored writing. After seeing many of the styles on here, I kinda figured I would give it a shot. Good or not, I just get the feelings out.

OdeToTheMuse · 03-19-2006, 08:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TatersMomma

something new i wrote. the issue of death has come more than i'd like lately.

i saw you crying
it didn't seem to ease your pain
i put my arms around you
and gave you reassurance
everything would be ok
you looked up at me
i saw you smile
but the pain was still evident
he's lost to you but you will grow stronger
the life you shared
will go on
even if only in your heart and mind
a soul is lost but
what's in your heart will last forever

Solitude awakens me to the reality that you're gone

hey! That's really beautiful!!! I just checked out your stuff and thought it's awesome!! Now I'm waitin' for more...

<33
Claudine

perfect ghost · 03-20-2006, 02:48 PM

Well I think you write wonderfully. I think it's really important to write in the way you feel best expresses what you are trying to describe. I almost hate writing anything for school, especially when it's a topic I know I could elaborate so much on and so something really great with. I always feel like I have to work within such a small box and that upsets me because I love writing so much. Keep writing, and I hope to read more soon.

Quote:

Originally Posted by TatersMomma

Thanks Alana. I'm still fairly new at writing. I think when I was younger I always tried to write the way the teacher said we should. So I got used to that pattern and never really explored writing. After seeing many of the styles on here, I kinda figured I would give it a shot. Good or not, I just get the feelings out.

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Wildangel Numb Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,510 Points: 4,116.53 Bank: 5,306,370.82 Total Points: 5,310,487.34 Donate	something new i wrote. the issue of death has come more than i'd like lately. i saw you crying it didn't seem to ease your pain i put my arms around you and gave you reassurance everything would be ok you looked up at me i saw you smile but the pain was still evident he's lost to you but you will grow stronger the life you shared will go on even if only in your heart and mind a soul is lost but what's in your heart will last forever Solitude awakens me to the reality that you're gone __________________ Last edited by Wildangel : 03-18-2006 at 08:19 PM.

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