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Wildangel · 01-09-2006, 10:19 PM

I'm going through quite a bit of shit right now. And well this just kinda flowed. It may suck, it may not. But here it is........

lying
crying
bleeding
ever-needing
whispers
unheard
just careless words
used
abused
not amused
a window to my soul

Violette · 01-10-2006, 10:05 AM

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Originally Posted by TatersMomma

Okay, i was inspired by a picture that Alarandiia posted in another thread. I got to thinking about the bed being empty and something missing. My daughter walked into the room and I thought about the little girl she was named after. This is a short lil poem about the little girls life. Nothing major. But I had a good cry out of it, which is what I think I needed.

So young, so pure,
innocence lost
a gift from god
her heart and lungs so weak
how can something so perfect have everything stacked against her
angels and light
renewed hope at the age of four
free of tubes
freedom to run
now age seven
she's ready to go home
a blizzard engulfs her home
she is calm
a familar scene
her body weakens
she reassures her mother, father and brother
that she will be alright
she closes her eyes
for eternal slumber

in memory of Kalana Elyse 1990-1997
"Why take your organs to heaven, Lord knows we need them here"

Wow, I really liked this poem. I like poems or stories that take you places, where you can kinda drift off and daydream as you read it and actually picture what's going on in the poem/story. Nice job!

Also like your pictures, too. Particularly the trees & sunset ones, and the picture inspired by Alarandiia's song.

Keep it up!

Wildangel · 01-10-2006, 05:57 PM

Okay, so i figured I would mess around with giving some peeps some tattoos.

This first one I think is pretty damn sexy. Anyhow*lol* I like how it turned out.

The tribal design in these last two are curtesy of Froz€n Ang€l

This one was just plain funny.

And this one was an experiment.

Im_Broken · 01-10-2006, 06:05 PM

Hey hey!!

I had a look at everything, and I must say that you are fricken talented. So amazing. Everything looks beautiful and wonderful and ahh I love it. haha.

Wildangel · 01-10-2006, 06:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Im_Broken

Hey hey!!

I had a look at everything, and I must say that you are fricken talented. So amazing. Everything looks beautiful and wonderful and ahh I love it. haha.

Thanks. Altho I'm having a serious creative block right now. My freehand drawing is the pits right now. But I'm working on trying to get out of this "creative" block.

Im_Broken · 01-10-2006, 09:19 PM

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Originally Posted by TatersMomma

Thanks. Altho I'm having a serious creative block right now. My freehand drawing is the pits right now. But I'm working on trying to get out of this "creative" block.

No problem. Ahh, breative block's are the worst thing in the world. Sometimes listening to calming music, and getting your mind off of everything really helps.

Wildangel · 01-10-2006, 09:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Im_Broken

No problem. Ahh, breative block's are the worst thing in the world. Sometimes listening to calming music, and getting your mind off of everything really helps.

actually I have been doing that alot lately. listening to ascention of the spirit and some jim brickman. I love piano stuff. I broke out the drawing pad the other day and did some very rough sketches, inspiration from an Alarandiia song I had heard last week. I'm hoping to get time to break this block and actually get the drawing done.

Jane · 01-10-2006, 10:06 PM

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Originally Posted by TatersMomma

I'm going through quite a bit of shit right now. And well this just kinda flowed. It may suck, it may not. But here it is........

lying
crying
bleeding
ever-needing
whispers
unheard
just careless words
used
abused
not amused
a window to my soul

First off, I want to make it clear that you pretty much just suck in general (in response to your first comments preceding your poem). Now that's said... this poem is incredibly well done. Sometimes shit happening is the best stuff to use for poems (sometimes not!)... you made it work well here.

In fact, I really do think if you were to submit this to a literary magazine, it would be published. I honestly think you'd catch an editor with this one. It's good.

Someone else on this page posted a response to one of your other poems (with poem included), which - in my opinion - wasn't anywhere as strong and as workable as this poem. I'm not sure it even worked as a whole, but I don't remember it. ^.^;; My point is that you're obviously improving, so focus on how all of what's happening in your life is affecting your creativity. Whatever it is, it seems to be an improvement, so I'd make sure not to lose that when the shit goes away.

The tattoo idea, btw is a cute one, and that butterfly does look sexy. :P I know they were experiments, but I would be careful about how you use that tribal designed Evanescence symbol. I don't think that would work well visually as a tattoo unless it was altered, colored, or bigger. (It just struck me as a lot of scribbles in both pics... which probably wasn't your fault. It might be the pics you chose, the tattoo, or whatever...) I just wanted to make you aware of the way I was looking at it.

When you're experimenting with that sort of thing you have to remember that there are a lot more factors. Not only do you have to think of the tattoo on the placement of the body as a tattoo artist would, but you have to think about the photograph and whether or not it will be showcased well. And yadda yadda, but I really don't think you wanted that much criticism as it was more fooling around, so I'll stop and spare ya.

Whoever said art wasn't a bunch of intellectual problem-solving brain pinchers was on crack, gay, or a failure in life.

(And some of you artists think you're so abstract and carefree or whatever, well you're not, and truth be told you're always thinking critically and you're always working technically with something or another... so be proud, don't be punk.)

I met a couple "artists" recently with that kind of view, "Oh I suck at science and math and all that shit, art is what I love"... but it's NEARLY the same thing! If you think about it really... Jeez. -.- [/rant]

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Wildangel · 01-10-2006, 10:31 PM

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Originally Posted by agentpudge

First off, I want to make it clear that you pretty much just suck in general (in response to your first comments preceding your poem). Now that's said... this poem is incredibly well done. Sometimes shit happening is the best stuff to use for poems (sometimes not!)... you made it work well here.

In fact, I really do think if you were to submit this to a literary magazine, it would be published. I honestly think you'd catch an editor with this one. It's good.

Someone else on this page posted a response to one of your other poems (with poem included), which - in my opinion - wasn't anywhere as strong and as workable as this poem. I'm not sure it even worked as a whole, but I don't remember it. ^.^;; My point is that you're obviously improving, so focus on how all of what's happening in your life is affecting your creativity. Whatever it is, it seems to be an improvement, so I'd make sure not to lose that when the shit goes away.

The tattoo idea, btw is a cute one, and that butterfly does look sexy. :P I know they were experiments, but I would be careful about how you use that tribal designed Evanescence symbol. I don't think that would work well visually as a tattoo unless it was altered, colored, or bigger. (It just struck me as a lot of scribbles in both pics... which probably wasn't your fault. It might be the pics you chose, the tattoo, or whatever...) I just wanted to make you aware of the way I was looking at it.

When you're experimenting with that sort of thing you have to remember that there are a lot more factors. Not only do you have to think of the tattoo on the placement of the body as a tattoo artist would, but you have to think about the photograph and whether or not it will be showcased well. And yadda yadda, but I really don't think you wanted that much criticism as it was more fooling around, so I'll stop and spare ya.

Whoever said art wasn't a bunch of intellectual problem-solving brain pinchers was on crack, gay, or a failure in life.

(And some of you artists think you're so abstract and carefree or whatever, well you're not, and truth be told you're always thinking critically and you're always working technically with something or another... so be proud, don't be punk.)

I met a couple "artists" recently with that kind of view, "Oh I suck at science and math and all that shit, art is what I love"... but it's NEARLY the same thing! If you think about it really... Jeez. -.- [/rant]

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uhm thanks for telling me i suck. guess i won't post anymore. Thanks.

edit...sorry agentpudge...sarcasm just didn't click in today. when i'm a lil less tired and a bit less stressed, i'll read the entire post...no offence taken.

Jane · 01-10-2006, 10:39 PM

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Originally Posted by TatersMomma

uhm thanks for telling me i suck. guess i won't post anymore. Thanks.

Umm... you totally picked up on my sarcasm in that right? ::Extremely worried:: I mean... you seriously caught the sarcasm considering I said you suck, and then went on to completely compliment you on the poem? Just to be sure...

EDIT: No problem, you just had be extremely worried that I'd unintentionally upset you pretty bad or something. Glad it's cool. :P

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Wildangel Numb Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 2,571 Points: 169.26 Bank: 8,333,580.68 Total Points: 8,333,749.93 Donate	I'm going through quite a bit of shit right now. And well this just kinda flowed. It may suck, it may not. But here it is........ lying crying bleeding ever-needing whispers unheard just careless words used abused not amused a window to my soul __________________

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Im_Broken Fledgling Post Monkey Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Illinois Posts: 1,397 Points: 470.00 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 470.00 Donate	Hey hey!! I had a look at everything, and I must say that you are fricken talented. So amazing. Everything looks beautiful and wonderful and ahh I love it. haha. __________________ -Rach- ((Check out my stuff)) when it starts to rain break out the slip and slide