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Old 10-20-2005, 09:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Well, since Silver's willing to post her songs, I might as well post a couple of my own. I've been working on them, and well, I would appreciate it if some people could give me some feedback on them. =3 I'm not too confident in my writing, but that's just me. I've gone through and editted them recently, so these are a couple of my contributions to Silver's band.

And I still need to learn to play my guitar. XP


Inferno

Roaring, searing, gold-red flames
Begin to lick my feet
Burning, burning, ever burning
My soul, they begin to eat

Staring with those cold black eyes
Oblivious to all around me
A single tear ran down my face
And then I found me screaming

Why, why have you tricked me?
Please, please, come back to me
The flames of Hell are at my door
And I need you by my side
I can feel something burning

Those ravenous flames, they tear at me
satisfying their feral hunger
Just like they, you kill me, too
I can feel you've pulled me under

Why, why have you tricked me?
Please, please, come back to me
The flames of Hell are at my door
And I need you by my side
I can feel something--

Why, why have you tricked me?
Please, please, come back to me
The flames of Hell are at my door
And I need you by my side
I need you by my side
I need you by my side

I can feel myself burning


So Mother Told Me


Wings of dragonflies
The welcome howling of the wolf
The setting of the golden sun
The moon's rays on my face

Pounding feral paws
Under the watchful eyes of the white stars
My eyes, they watch the Earth
I sigh in contentment

What has become of this world?
Such contamination
What has become of the world?
I wish such visions were real

(Gone and gone
Will they ever return?)

Humans and wildlife
They clash and clash until they all fall down
An inevitable war
What as this world come to?

What has become of this world?
Such contamination
What has become of the world?
Only in my fantasies shall this ever exist

(Gone and gone
Were they ever real?)


My eyes, they droop
My fantasy becoming a living dream
I listened as she spoke my name
Told me of days long gone

The world as we know it
It will all fade away and then be gone
So while I can
I shall live my own dreams

Oh, Mother Earth
How I will miss your wondrous tales
But we all begin to fade
And I sing my farewells

What has become of this world?
Such contamination
What has become of the small world?
I wonder in silence...

(I wonder and I wonder
Maybe...just maybe...)


The running, leaping wild deer
The leopards and the wolves, no more
Shall they walk this Earth
As we all fade away
And as you wonder, child
You don't have to fear
You and I, we'll all live on
We shall find a way

What has become of this world?
Such contamination
What has become of the old world?

(Mother, I know you're right
We will find a way)

(Gone and gone
Will they ever return?

Come, come my child
You don’t have to fear
You and I, we’ll all live on, yes
And we shall find a way)



Head in the Clouds

I wander in the doorway
Gazing out with clouded eyes
Reminiscing of times we shared in days gone past
I clench my fists and scream despair
You've betrayed me and now
I'm flying with broken wings

We were once so close
Some called it love
(An everlasting elation)
But as we grew, you fell away
We no longer speak
And your love left elsewhere, leaving me behind to
Fly with broken wings

You don't remember me
And I try not to remember you
So much pain you bring to me
I fall to me knees and cry
For I'm flying with broken wings

Why won't you leave?
(And let me be, be, be?)
Your lingering essence tears me apart
And I can no longer take it
I don't want to
Fly with broken wings

You don't remember me
I won't remember you
No longer shall you hurt me
For I will no longer
Fly with broken wings

(I’ve thought, and I’ve thought
And I knew in the end
We could never be together
No longer need I pretend

And now come to realize
That I must overcome the hardships
And so I must decide now
The pain in my wings so strong

And so)


With all my might
I'll banish you from my mind
Your haunting me will cease
And my heart will heal
So that I can mend my broken wings
And gracefully fly once more

(And so

With all my might
I'll banish you from my mind
Your haunting me will cease
And my heart will heal
So that I can mend my broken wings
And gracefully fly once more)


You don't remember me
I won't remember you
No longer shall you hurt me
For I will no longer
Fly with broken wings



I hope those who read these enjoyed them. I've tried and I've worked my best, and here are the fruits of that labor. ^^

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I've already seen your songs, so yeah, you already know how I feel about them. ^^

Silvie has merely come to say, keep postin', mah fwiend! <3

You'll get some comments soon, all you can do is keep posting your stuff, buddy. Yer awesome, after all. ^^
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*sigh* I is not that great at writing songs, methinks. ^^; I think I'm a mediocre writer. So-so. In the middle. You get me point. XD

Well, I guess I'll just post updates and drawings, and recent songs. Hm...well, under Inferno in the first post, I've finally written some music to it. Got the tempo and the beat set (keyboards can be so awesome, for mine has a set beat or precussion settings on it to create a beat <3), along with a little tune. It needs a ton of work, and I'm going to have to find the notes and write them on an actual scale. Letters won't mean much to the band if they can't see it on a scale. Or maybe not. Maybe it's just me. o.O

Most recently, I've written a song. Currently, it is untitled. Suggestions are welcome and appreciated, if someone should come up with something! =D


Untitled
I look at you small picture
I toss it to the floor
I know you've betrayed me
That much I can't ignore

I look to the sky
I see your brown eyes
I scowl at the thought of you
Your words, they were never true

(I'll fly far away
Away far from you
Where you can no longer lie
To my face)

You said you loved me
You made me want to believe
You brought me sweet love and flowers
You had me in your grasp, I'll admit

You said you'll be back
But then you never came
Now that you're here
Who is to blame?

(I'll fly far away
Away far from you
Where your power is no more
And your lies are meaningless to my ears)

You got on your knees
You begged me to stay
I sigh and glare down at you
You lied to me
You foul-mouthed traitor
You ran off with someone new
You may be here
Here at my feet
But you're the guy I never truly knew

(I'll fly far away
Away far from you
I'll hide in the truth
I'll hide in the truth...

I'll fly far away
Away far from you
I'll hide in the truth
In them, I'll hide from you)


...so what do you guys think? If my Christian teacher can like it, I know it's worth something. oo; If only a little. *shrug*

Hmm...now, drawings. I've so far only one Evany related one, and I guess I can add a few others I deem worthy to let people see them. Most of them stay hidden away except from my closest friends (Arcane and Kikonu).


Malice in Wonderland Amy as Hello Kitty! <3<3 X3


Siren, an herbalist and animal speaker, and Thorn, her cat.

I think this shall do for now. *tilts head* Yeah. I'm content with this little update. ^w^
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