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n00blet
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Well, since Silver's willing to post her songs, I might as well post a couple of my own. I've been working on them, and well, I would appreciate it if some people could give me some feedback on them. =3 I'm not too confident in my writing, but that's just me. I've gone through and editted them recently, so these are a couple of my contributions to Silver's band.
And I still need to learn to play my guitar. XP Inferno Roaring, searing, gold-red flames Begin to lick my feet Burning, burning, ever burning My soul, they begin to eat Staring with those cold black eyes Oblivious to all around me A single tear ran down my face And then I found me screaming Why, why have you tricked me? Please, please, come back to me The flames of Hell are at my door And I need you by my side I can feel something burning Those ravenous flames, they tear at me satisfying their feral hunger Just like they, you kill me, too I can feel you've pulled me under Why, why have you tricked me? Please, please, come back to me The flames of Hell are at my door And I need you by my side I can feel something-- Why, why have you tricked me? Please, please, come back to me The flames of Hell are at my door And I need you by my side I need you by my side I need you by my side I can feel myself burning So Mother Told Me Wings of dragonflies The welcome howling of the wolf The setting of the golden sun The moon's rays on my face Pounding feral paws Under the watchful eyes of the white stars My eyes, they watch the Earth I sigh in contentment What has become of this world? Such contamination What has become of the world? I wish such visions were real (Gone and gone Will they ever return?) Humans and wildlife They clash and clash until they all fall down An inevitable war What as this world come to? What has become of this world? Such contamination What has become of the world? Only in my fantasies shall this ever exist (Gone and gone Were they ever real?) My eyes, they droop My fantasy becoming a living dream I listened as she spoke my name Told me of days long gone The world as we know it It will all fade away and then be gone So while I can I shall live my own dreams Oh, Mother Earth How I will miss your wondrous tales But we all begin to fade And I sing my farewells What has become of this world? Such contamination What has become of the small world? I wonder in silence... (I wonder and I wonder Maybe...just maybe...) The running, leaping wild deer The leopards and the wolves, no more Shall they walk this Earth As we all fade away And as you wonder, child You don't have to fear You and I, we'll all live on We shall find a way What has become of this world? Such contamination What has become of the old world? (Mother, I know you're right We will find a way) (Gone and gone Will they ever return? Come, come my child You don’t have to fear You and I, we’ll all live on, yes And we shall find a way) Head in the Clouds I wander in the doorway Gazing out with clouded eyes Reminiscing of times we shared in days gone past I clench my fists and scream despair You've betrayed me and now I'm flying with broken wings We were once so close Some called it love (An everlasting elation) But as we grew, you fell away We no longer speak And your love left elsewhere, leaving me behind to Fly with broken wings You don't remember me And I try not to remember you So much pain you bring to me I fall to me knees and cry For I'm flying with broken wings Why won't you leave? (And let me be, be, be?) Your lingering essence tears me apart And I can no longer take it I don't want to Fly with broken wings You don't remember me I won't remember you No longer shall you hurt me For I will no longer Fly with broken wings (I’ve thought, and I’ve thought And I knew in the end We could never be together No longer need I pretend And now come to realize That I must overcome the hardships And so I must decide now The pain in my wings so strong And so) With all my might I'll banish you from my mind Your haunting me will cease And my heart will heal So that I can mend my broken wings And gracefully fly once more (And so With all my might I'll banish you from my mind Your haunting me will cease And my heart will heal So that I can mend my broken wings And gracefully fly once more) You don't remember me I won't remember you No longer shall you hurt me For I will no longer Fly with broken wings I hope those who read these enjoyed them. I've tried and I've worked my best, and here are the fruits of that labor. ^^ |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Kentucky
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I've already seen your songs, so yeah, you already know how I feel about them. ^^
Silvie has merely come to say, keep postin', mah fwiend! <3 You'll get some comments soon, all you can do is keep posting your stuff, buddy. Yer awesome, after all. ^^ |
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n00blet
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*sigh* I is not that great at writing songs, methinks. ^^; I think I'm a mediocre writer. So-so. In the middle. You get me point. XD
Well, I guess I'll just post updates and drawings, and recent songs. Hm...well, under Inferno in the first post, I've finally written some music to it. Got the tempo and the beat set (keyboards can be so awesome, for mine has a set beat or precussion settings on it to create a beat <3), along with a little tune. It needs a ton of work, and I'm going to have to find the notes and write them on an actual scale. Letters won't mean much to the band if they can't see it on a scale. Or maybe not. Maybe it's just me. o.O Most recently, I've written a song. Currently, it is untitled. Suggestions are welcome and appreciated, if someone should come up with something! =D Untitled I look at you small picture I toss it to the floor I know you've betrayed me That much I can't ignore I look to the sky I see your brown eyes I scowl at the thought of you Your words, they were never true (I'll fly far away Away far from you Where you can no longer lie To my face) You said you loved me You made me want to believe You brought me sweet love and flowers You had me in your grasp, I'll admit You said you'll be back But then you never came Now that you're here Who is to blame? (I'll fly far away Away far from you Where your power is no more And your lies are meaningless to my ears) You got on your knees You begged me to stay I sigh and glare down at you You lied to me You foul-mouthed traitor You ran off with someone new You may be here Here at my feet But you're the guy I never truly knew (I'll fly far away Away far from you I'll hide in the truth I'll hide in the truth... I'll fly far away Away far from you I'll hide in the truth In them, I'll hide from you) ...so what do you guys think? If my Christian teacher can like it, I know it's worth something. oo; If only a little. *shrug* Hmm...now, drawings. I've so far only one Evany related one, and I guess I can add a few others I deem worthy to let people see them. Most of them stay hidden away except from my closest friends (Arcane and Kikonu). ![]() Malice in Wonderland Amy as Hello Kitty! <3<3 X3 ![]() Siren, an herbalist and animal speaker, and Thorn, her cat. I think this shall do for now. *tilts head* Yeah. I'm content with this little update. ^w^ |
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