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~river~ · 07-27-2008, 09:07 PM

If I could outrun the wind
Would my long searched for
Release be mine
Could I catch that elusive
Hope that one day
Salvation will greet me
By my name and
Take me home
Where I belong
Safe in my love’s arms
Instead I just feel the
Cold that leaves an ache
Muscles built only
For escape
I carry no will to
Stay and fight
I can not stand alone
To make these wrongs
Work and produce a right
A happy ending is all
I ask for
However, you leave me
Kneeling and asking for my turn
There is no regret
Mirrored in your calculating eyes
Just hard truths you
Would rather not share
Unless twisted with words
That no-one wants to hear
I reached for my salvation
To feel it fly from clasped hands
Each day I race the wind
In hope to win
And find my end
A peace at least
Held tight in arms
That ease old pains
Tension be gone
Release be mine

music box · 07-27-2008, 10:27 PM

I love your writing. This was my favorite part:

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

If I could outrun the wind
Would my long searched for
Release be mine
Could I catch that elusive
Hope that one day
Salvation will greet me
By my name and
Take me home
Where I belong
Safe in my love’s arms

So emotive. So hopefull yet...so sorrowful. I've felt it many times before.

<33

VampireMina · 07-28-2008, 12:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

If I could outrun the wind
Would my long searched for
Release be mine
Could I catch that elusive
Hope that one day
Salvation will greet me
By my name and
Take me home
Where I belong
Safe in my love’s arms
Instead I just feel the
Cold that leaves an ache
Muscles built only
For escape
I carry no will to
Stay and fight
I can not stand alone
To make these wrongs
Work and produce a right
A happy ending is all
I ask for
However, you leave me
Kneeling and asking for my turn
There is no regret
Mirrored in your calculating eyes
Just hard truths you
Would rather not share
Unless twisted with words
That no-one wants to hear
I reached for my salvation
To feel it fly from clasped hands
Each day I race the wind
In hope to win
And find my end
A peace at least
Held tight in arms
That ease old pains
Tension be gone
Release be mine

Wow, I feel like you took a peak into my heart and wrote what you found. Simply beautiful, and profound. Keep writing!

~river~ · 07-28-2008, 08:08 PM

Mercy and charity
Have turned their faces from me
Faith is losing her belief in me
I am being left behind
Am I to lost to be saved
To forsaken for you to be concerned
If this sunset does not release me
When will I get my turn to sleep
Tension is running high
Stealing any chance for a peaceful rest
A furious fight for chance of balance
Stability when hope is gone
Is only fragile
Breakable you labelled me
Charity and mercy left you
Without pity
You murdered hope within
Taking joy from my
Bloodstained soul only
Faith remained torn in to
By desire to flee
But waiting dreaming
For an end
The end mercy robbed me of
When charity could not share
Good fortune with a bloodied soul
So tainted by mortality
Will sunset let me free
Find the time to heal
Old wounds
Escaping in the dark
I know I am lost
I am forsaken
Even faith is fragile

~river~ · 07-30-2008, 10:51 PM

I will be screaming your name as you pull me down
Can you hear the hatred?
Hysteria morphing my voice
Will you let this end tonight?
Violence burning where you touch
I have lost myself in this rage before
This passion, this fire
Is beautiful but twisted
One longing embraced by two
Your hands while forceful remains soft and wanted
As much as I loathe you
I need you as well

Shawn8888 · 07-30-2008, 11:10 PM

outrun is my favorite. I can completely relate. Sometimes I feel like I cant get away sometimes. Especially with people I don't know.

music box · 08-03-2008, 12:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

As much as I loathe you
I need you as well

I know that all too well.

~river~ · 08-07-2008, 07:07 AM

Wings
I am spreading my wings full of holes
I never had the chance to succeed
When I was cursed from the start
The chance of an ending so graceful with ease
Was never granted to me
Left as a mortal only here to scramble
For a chance of something greater
To consume me
Give this life some passion
Only empty wings
Cannot fight the wind
Will let me take flight
I am left to plummet
Broken bones surrounded by dreams
If I could awake and make this change anew
Would I find the energy to try again
The effort to walk each day
To take each step is taking a toll
And when I can no longer fly
I am destined to struggle
I try to build the dreams and hopes back into something more
But I am unable to fight for another day
The curse is a burden to hard to bare
I spread my wings
More tattered and torn from yet another fall

music box · 08-08-2008, 10:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

Wings
I am spreading my wings full of holes
I never had the chance to succeed
When I was cursed from the start
The chance of an ending so graceful with ease
Was never granted to me
Left as a mortal only here to scramble
For a chance of something greater
To consume me
Give this life some passion
Only empty wings
Cannot fight the wind
Will let me take flight
I am left to plummet
Broken bones surrounded by dreams
If I could awake and make this change anew
Would I find the energy to try again
The effort to walk each day
To take each step is taking a toll
And when I can no longer fly
I am destined to struggle
I try to build the dreams and hopes back into something more
But I am unable to fight for another day
The curse is a burden to hard to bare
I spread my wings
More tattered and torn from yet another fall

I reallllly liked this one. Especially this part:

Quote:

For a chance of something greater
To consume me
Give this life some passion

And this:

Quote:

If I could awake and make this change anew
Would I find the energy to try again
The effort to walk each day
To take each step is taking a toll
And when I can no longer fly
I am destined to struggle
I try to build the dreams and hopes back into something more
But I am unable to fight for another day

What we feel we have to give is never enough, and what sucks even more is when we feel that emptiness and assume we think it's never enough either. It takes so much to live and sometimes life just takes the breath right out of us. - Just kind of what I got out of that. "I am destined to struggle" That line confirmed the swelling of tears in my eyeballs. :P

You're amazing, keep writing, keep posting!

07-27-2008, 09:07 PM	#91 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 2,004 Points: 729.61 Bank: 205,855.80 Total Points: 206,585.41 Donate	outrun If I could outrun the wind Would my long searched for Release be mine Could I catch that elusive Hope that one day Salvation will greet me By my name and Take me home Where I belong Safe in my love’s arms Instead I just feel the Cold that leaves an ache Muscles built only For escape I carry no will to Stay and fight I can not stand alone To make these wrongs Work and produce a right A happy ending is all I ask for However, you leave me Kneeling and asking for my turn There is no regret Mirrored in your calculating eyes Just hard truths you Would rather not share Unless twisted with words That no-one wants to hear I reached for my salvation To feel it fly from clasped hands Each day I race the wind In hope to win And find my end A peace at least Held tight in arms That ease old pains Tension be gone Release be mine __________________ Breathe for love tomorrow Cause there's no hope for today Breathe for love tomorrow Cause maybe there's another way

07-28-2008, 08:08 PM	#94 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 2,004 Points: 729.61 Bank: 205,855.80 Total Points: 206,585.41 Donate	Mercy and charity Have turned their faces from me Faith is losing her belief in me I am being left behind Am I to lost to be saved To forsaken for you to be concerned If this sunset does not release me When will I get my turn to sleep Tension is running high Stealing any chance for a peaceful rest A furious fight for chance of balance Stability when hope is gone Is only fragile Breakable you labelled me Charity and mercy left you Without pity You murdered hope within Taking joy from my Bloodstained soul only Faith remained torn in to By desire to flee But waiting dreaming For an end The end mercy robbed me of When charity could not share Good fortune with a bloodied soul So tainted by mortality Will sunset let me free Find the time to heal Old wounds Escaping in the dark I know I am lost I am forsaken Even faith is fragile __________________ Breathe for love tomorrow Cause there's no hope for today Breathe for love tomorrow Cause maybe there's another way

07-30-2008, 10:51 PM	#95 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 2,004 Points: 729.61 Bank: 205,855.80 Total Points: 206,585.41 Donate	I will be screaming your name as you pull me down Can you hear the hatred? Hysteria morphing my voice Will you let this end tonight? Violence burning where you touch I have lost myself in this rage before This passion, this fire Is beautiful but twisted One longing embraced by two Your hands while forceful remains soft and wanted As much as I loathe you I need you as well __________________ Breathe for love tomorrow Cause there's no hope for today Breathe for love tomorrow Cause maybe there's another way

07-30-2008, 11:10 PM	#96 (permalink)
Shawn8888 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: I cant remember Age: 27 Posts: 178 Points: 8,032.37 Bank: 2,587.07 Total Points: 10,619.44 Donate	outrun is my favorite. I can completely relate. Sometimes I feel like I cant get away sometimes. Especially with people I don't know. __________________ Clue to the invasion of the buttocks. All the victims in the picture sound and look similar to ET the extraterrestrial. Can you spot John Regan The abductor. Why is that frisbee on that dudes head. Its like a green throw in frisbee. On his head. My Stuff Set the image of the school to Neon 9/11

08-07-2008, 07:07 AM	#98 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 2,004 Points: 729.61 Bank: 205,855.80 Total Points: 206,585.41 Donate	Wings I am spreading my wings full of holes I never had the chance to succeed When I was cursed from the start The chance of an ending so graceful with ease Was never granted to me Left as a mortal only here to scramble For a chance of something greater To consume me Give this life some passion Only empty wings Cannot fight the wind Will let me take flight I am left to plummet Broken bones surrounded by dreams If I could awake and make this change anew Would I find the energy to try again The effort to walk each day To take each step is taking a toll And when I can no longer fly I am destined to struggle I try to build the dreams and hopes back into something more But I am unable to fight for another day The curse is a burden to hard to bare I spread my wings More tattered and torn from yet another fall __________________ Breathe for love tomorrow Cause there's no hope for today Breathe for love tomorrow Cause maybe there's another way

08-09-2008, 02:31 AM	#100 (permalink)
~river~ Lips Like Morphine