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~river~ · 02-27-2008, 11:45 PM

enticing me, teasing me
alluring me, drawing me
down
breaking me, hating me
beating me, holding me
down

beneath the surface
gasping for air
the world above to far away
swim for salvation
drown in the depths

carrying me, holding me
cradling me, letting me
down
raising me, teaching me,
testing me, pulling me
down

break my heart and take me down
left beneath the winter snow
frozen water im trapped below

~river~ · 02-29-2008, 12:06 AM

the one
the final spark
a hint of hope
a winter breeze
carries you higher

over the sea
over the sun
little pheonix fire
taken higher

seeing your light
feeling you take flight
little pheonix fire
rise again
take me higher
take me higher

warming glow
of a heart
taken back to its start
pheonix spark
healing me
taken back to my start

a winter breeze
carries you higher
a hint of hope
the final spark
the one

carry me higher
my pheonix fire
back to the start
a whole heart
carry me higher
little pheonix fire

Shivercide · 02-29-2008, 01:00 AM

My favorites:

Quote:

Tide
Sitting at end of the pier
Little between me and the horizon
Grey clouds roll in
Wind whips up my hair
My wet dress
Embraces my broken body

I sit I watch
The waves rise up
And pass me by
Each whisper to me
Tells me lies

Sitting at the edge of the world
Existence I have felt
Crumbled in my hand

No one like you
To hold me close
And murmur in my ear
The pretty words
I long to hear

Like the shoreline
I give way
i go under pulled
to the tide

Quote:

its a quiter colder time of year
the last autumn leaf falls the to floor
the final decent
of the trees last defense
i wait for the frost to come
to freeze me to this time and place
crimson blood running cold
my limbs are aching
tired and sore
i have sat and waited to long
in this place
for you to show
the summer leaves grew and fell
i never thought you would break me so

You have wonderfully descriptive writing. *loves intricate detail*

These lines just about floored me:

"the final decent
of the trees last defense
i wait for the frost to come"

Selfish&Cold · 02-29-2008, 12:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

enticing me, teasing me
alluring me, drawing me
down
breaking me, hating me
beating me, holding me
down

beneath the surface
gasping for air
the world above to far away
swim for salvation
drown in the depths

carrying me, holding me
cradling me, letting me
down
raising me, teaching me,
testing me, pulling me
down

break my heart and take me down
left beneath the winter snow
frozen water im trapped below

I had no idea you were a writer. This is my favorite.

~river~ · 03-02-2008, 03:08 AM

to steph and vince a very very big thanks.
i cant believe i "floored you" steph *is in shock*

im looking for something
i lost in my dreams
when i couldnt sleep

a night time terror
kept me moving
keep me running
a night time horror
kept me waking
keep me racing

caught up in this history
never new to me
when i know the end is comming

the night is comming
bringing with it my terror
bringing with it my horror
its comming on
its comming strong

but ...
im sick of running away
im tired of playing along
of searching for something
lost back in my history
this dreaming
is never new to me

im tired
i cant fall asleep
i know the end is comming

~river~ · 03-04-2008, 12:49 AM

this is our ending
don't waste your last breath on me
i let myself get pulled under by you
swayed by the tide
in this game of love and war
passion is never nothing more
then a pretty lie
i could not swim
you could not save me
dragged out to sea
a lonesome soul
awashed with dreams
our ending starts
where the skies meets the waves
boundaries unravelled
two souls became one

~river~ · 03-07-2008, 09:07 PM

Lay The Blame

Entwined and tangled
It is so dangerous
To play a fight
To lay the blame
Let it fall down now
Place your unfounded fear
On me
Ill be your sorrow
Ill be your villain

Faltering softly
Gamble the guilt
The stakes are to high
Raise the pain more
Until you feel numb
Place your broken dreams
On me
Ill be your morphine
Ill be your saviour

Tear me apart
If it will relieve your pain
Ill be your sorrow
Ill be your morphine
Ill be your villain
Ill be your saviour
Ill be yours
Just tear me apart
Lay the blame on me
All I ever wanted
Was to be yours
Your villain
Your victim

Sweet Tigger · 03-08-2008, 11:50 AM

Wow Shannon,

I absolutely Love ALL your writtings!
Every word I read, with each one, its like
I can just feel every single emotion from my
heat and soul.
Reading these, is very touching, and ever so real.
Gosh....these are simply amazing, and they hit me,
very deep down.

~river~ · 03-09-2008, 04:35 AM

trina thankyou so very much, i appreciate everything you just said.

you

Cut me open
I’ll bleed for you
Crimson beauty
Only for you
Each tear that falls
The cause is you

Body and soul
I’m torn apart
Body and soul
I can’t make it right

Wait for me
You left me behind
I lingered
The last kiss
Hollow heartfelt
A long good bye

Body and soul
I’m torn apart
Body and soul
I’m lost in the dark

Enclosed in a memory
Encased in a dream
Where you come back to me
Where you came back to me
Crimson beauty I’ll bleed for you

02-27-2008, 11:45 PM	#11 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,819 Points: 352.73 Bank: 133,177.36 Total Points: 133,530.08 Donate	enticing me, teasing me alluring me, drawing me down breaking me, hating me beating me, holding me down beneath the surface gasping for air the world above to far away swim for salvation drown in the depths carrying me, holding me cradling me, letting me down raising me, teaching me, testing me, pulling me down break my heart and take me down left beneath the winter snow frozen water im trapped below __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

02-29-2008, 12:06 AM	#12 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,819 Points: 352.73 Bank: 133,177.36 Total Points: 133,530.08 Donate	the one the final spark a hint of hope a winter breeze carries you higher over the sea over the sun little pheonix fire taken higher seeing your light feeling you take flight little pheonix fire rise again take me higher take me higher warming glow of a heart taken back to its start pheonix spark healing me taken back to my start a winter breeze carries you higher a hint of hope the final spark the one carry me higher my pheonix fire back to the start a whole heart carry me higher little pheonix fire __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

03-02-2008, 03:08 AM	#15 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,819 Points: 352.73 Bank: 133,177.36 Total Points: 133,530.08 Donate	to steph and vince a very very big thanks. i cant believe i "floored you" steph is in shock im looking for something i lost in my dreams when i couldnt sleep a night time terror kept me moving keep me running a night time horror kept me waking keep me racing caught up in this history never new to me when i know the end is comming the night is comming bringing with it my terror bringing with it my horror its comming on its comming strong but ... im sick of running away im tired of playing along of searching for something lost back in my history this dreaming is never new to me im tired i cant fall asleep i know the end is comming __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

03-04-2008, 12:49 AM	#16 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,819 Points: 352.73 Bank: 133,177.36 Total Points: 133,530.08 Donate	this is our ending don't waste your last breath on me i let myself get pulled under by you swayed by the tide in this game of love and war passion is never nothing more then a pretty lie i could not swim you could not save me dragged out to sea a lonesome soul awashed with dreams our ending starts where the skies meets the waves boundaries unravelled two souls became one __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

03-07-2008, 09:07 PM	#17 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,819 Points: 352.73 Bank: 133,177.36 Total Points: 133,530.08 Donate	Lay The Blame Entwined and tangled It is so dangerous To play a fight To lay the blame Let it fall down now Place your unfounded fear On me Ill be your sorrow Ill be your villain Faltering softly Gamble the guilt The stakes are to high Raise the pain more Until you feel numb Place your broken dreams On me Ill be your morphine Ill be your saviour Tear me apart If it will relieve your pain Ill be your sorrow Ill be your morphine Ill be your villain Ill be your saviour Ill be yours Just tear me apart Lay the blame on me All I ever wanted Was to be yours Your villain Your victim __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.

03-08-2008, 11:50 AM	#18 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Pure Hearted Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 2,745 Points: 5,262.58 Bank: 123,567.83 Total Points: 128,830.42 Donate $PIE. \m/ Heh, you're awesome. :D - CrownlessAgain$	Wow Shannon, I absolutely Love ALL your writtings! Every word I read, with each one, its like I can just feel every single emotion from my heat and soul. Reading these, is very touching, and ever so real. Gosh....these are simply amazing, and they hit me, very deep down. __________________

03-09-2008, 04:35 AM	#19 (permalink)
~river~ Likes Stilts! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,819 Points: 352.73 Bank: 133,177.36 Total Points: 133,530.08 Donate	trina thankyou so very much, i appreciate everything you just said. you Cut me open I’ll bleed for you Crimson beauty Only for you Each tear that falls The cause is you Body and soul I’m torn apart Body and soul I can’t make it right Wait for me You left me behind I lingered The last kiss Hollow heartfelt A long good bye Body and soul I’m torn apart Body and soul I’m lost in the dark Enclosed in a memory Encased in a dream Where you come back to me Where you came back to me Crimson beauty I’ll bleed for you __________________ There's no aphrodisiac like loneliness, truth, beauty and a picture of you. Blackbird singing in the dead of night, Take these broken wings and learn to fly All your life You were only waiting for this moment to arise Fly, Blackbird, fly Into the light of the dark black night.