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~river~ · 04-19-2008, 07:01 PM

I dream in death
the final moments
the rise then fall
of my last breath

in this sleep I know I smile
the great escape
for once at peace
for once at rest

freedom like I could never live
I will soar high

but this freedom is short lived
I will wake
and this memory will fade
my chest will rise
and then will fall
each breath
I know I am alive

~river~ · 04-28-2008, 08:10 PM

Falling at your feet
Submitting to your will
I will save myself
If i succumb to you
Keep my rare fractured soul
From crumbling further
The smaller fragments
Fade to dust
Crying to be held by you
Needing to feel on fire
Can you take me whole?
Remove this cold
Make me feel alive
How i break is up to
I am left longing
Nursing wounds
Old and new
Old open scars
Bright red lines on
Porcelain white hands
Outstreached from fear
Gutteral screaming
Tears at your conscience
Leave me behind
This is how i break
I would sacrifice myself
To make you happy
I have given all i had to give
Do you know I am not alright
My sacrifice was not enough
This is how i break

~river~ · 05-12-2008, 08:54 PM

I hold my breathe
Allow myself a chance
A chance to hope
That you could love me
That you could hold me

But a memory you
Fade away
At my touch
Nothing more than a whisp
Time cannot be undone
All things cannot be undone
All things cannot be forgiven

Scars will mark a perfect face

If i break the clock
.....................will time stand still?

Entrap us in it's messy web
the last leaf fallen
fallen forever
hovered forever just above
It's resting place

Sleep and dream
I will hold breath
The memory fades
The leaves will fall
Time keeps on moving
No concern, no care
For those standing still
.....................Left standing still

Sweet Tigger · 05-12-2008, 09:04 PM

Shannon,
I think that poem was just simply amazing.
Very deep, heartfelt, alot of feeling and emotion
written in it.
I read every word, and understand what it says, and I
can actually picture a vision in every sentence.
Very well done, I love poems like this, where I can
see it.
Never stop writing!

bessy · 05-13-2008, 11:57 AM

Very good! I like it!

~river~ · 05-18-2008, 07:40 PM

I can not cry
Release these tears
It is a weakness
I will drown inside
Before i falter
To purge the posion
I can not risk
To taint a heart
Untouched by pain
Pure Beauty should remain so

I was once such a soul
Innocent eyes to a
Gold guided world
Such beauty if now
Burnt at my touch
A wilted rose
I can not love

A shut my eyes
To almost feel the sun
I hold your hand
And come undone
And if only
Dreams mirrored reality
Eternal battker
I would lose myself
To save a heart
Of pure wonder

I will drown inside
I can not cry
Release these tears
To you posion you

~river~ · 05-20-2008, 10:11 PM

I am Anne Boleyn
the tragic queen
of broken hearts and
shattered dreams
i gave you all i had to give
to feed desire
to satisfy hunger
it was not enough
i had no more to give

i still live in the heart
of your darkest nightmares
and your deeepest desires
my sacrifice
blood spilt in your name
will not dry and will not leave you
haunt you til you cannot sleep

i will make you scream my name
vengance is a strange
and fought for state of mind
you will suffer, you will cry

Im Anne boleyn your tragic Queen
you found me wanting
you found me needing
your hunger did not wane

the moon will change
the tide will rise
your memories will never fade
the tragic queen
my reign continues
a legacy to those hearts broken

Shivercide · 05-22-2008, 07:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~river~

sunlight memory
a half formed thought
the words
just out of my reach
just out of my life

summer shower
i let the rain fall
down on me
golden dreaming
the closest i've come
to heaven

let this rain fall down
melt away
the frost of time

memories just a sequence
a sequence lost
frozen in time
go back to that place
go back to that day

reminisce
the sunlit showers
image of a summer smile
golden dreaming

just out of my reach
always
out of my reach
shut my eyes
and im
close to heaven

memories
my golden dreaming

I wanted to say that even though I've never commented on this one before, it is one of my most favorites of yours. The words overall are beautiful, and you definitely know how to use repetition the way it's supposed to be used. Instead of becoming redundant, it just adds more power to drive the feeling home.

~river~ · 06-05-2008, 06:59 PM

^ thanks steph, it is one of the few i am actually really happy with

this is just one i pulled together i had to many words floating around my head and i just needed to do something to unload a bit

My Ghost

A diminutive reflection
No substance to this image you see
Just a ghost of who I could be

Alone and lost
So very fragile

These wings I have
That will not carry
My heart so heavy
With the weight of loss
So tainted with the sense of need

In these eyes you could get lost
Forget the you, you are
A maze is hidden behind these lashes
Join me help me find my way out

Alone and lost
So very fragile

It’s the risk of getting hurt
That is beautiful
The chance to fly
To feel the sun
To feel alive
With no wings I fall

Will you met me
Let destiny carry us
In her tide
Swept away til borders blend
And we can touch the stars

Fragile wings
Diminutive reflection
The ghost of who I could be

04-19-2008, 07:01 PM	#51 (permalink)
~river~ I iz st00pid lyke whut? Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,617 Points: 558.40 Bank: 72,495.39 Total Points: 73,053.80 Donate	I dream in death the final moments the rise then fall of my last breath in this sleep I know I smile the great escape for once at peace for once at rest freedom like I could never live I will soar high but this freedom is short lived I will wake and this memory will fade my chest will rise and then will fall each breath I know I am alive __________________ Life is pain, life is only pain. We're all taught to believe in happy fairytale endings, But there is only blackness; dark depressing loneliness that eats away at your soul. Sex and the City

04-28-2008, 08:10 PM	#52 (permalink)
~river~ I iz st00pid lyke whut? Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,617 Points: 558.40 Bank: 72,495.39 Total Points: 73,053.80 Donate	How to Break Falling at your feet Submitting to your will I will save myself If i succumb to you Keep my rare fractured soul From crumbling further The smaller fragments Fade to dust Crying to be held by you Needing to feel on fire Can you take me whole? Remove this cold Make me feel alive How i break is up to I am left longing Nursing wounds Old and new Old open scars Bright red lines on Porcelain white hands Outstreached from fear Gutteral screaming Tears at your conscience Leave me behind This is how i break I would sacrifice myself To make you happy I have given all i had to give Do you know I am not alright My sacrifice was not enough This is how i break __________________ Life is pain, life is only pain. We're all taught to believe in happy fairytale endings, But there is only blackness; dark depressing loneliness that eats away at your soul. Sex and the City

05-12-2008, 08:54 PM	#53 (permalink)
~river~ I iz st00pid lyke whut? Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,617 Points: 558.40 Bank: 72,495.39 Total Points: 73,053.80 Donate	I hold my breathe Allow myself a chance A chance to hope That you could love me That you could hold me But a memory you Fade away At my touch Nothing more than a whisp Time cannot be undone All things cannot be undone All things cannot be forgiven Scars will mark a perfect face If i break the clock .....................will time stand still? Entrap us in it's messy web the last leaf fallen fallen forever hovered forever just above It's resting place Sleep and dream I will hold breath The memory fades The leaves will fall Time keeps on moving No concern, no care For those standing still .....................Left standing still __________________ Life is pain, life is only pain. We're all taught to believe in happy fairytale endings, But there is only blackness; dark depressing loneliness that eats away at your soul. Sex and the City

05-12-2008, 09:04 PM	#54 (permalink)
Sweet Tigger Miss Happy-Go-Lucky Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Over The Rainbow Age: 31 Posts: 1,899 Points: 10,620.64 Bank: 41,515.84 Total Points: 52,136.48 Donate	Shannon, I think that poem was just simply amazing. Very deep, heartfelt, alot of feeling and emotion written in it. I read every word, and understand what it says, and I can actually picture a vision in every sentence. Very well done, I love poems like this, where I can see it. Never stop writing! __________________ Always Believe In Your Self!!!

05-18-2008, 07:40 PM	#56 (permalink)
~river~ I iz st00pid lyke whut? Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,617 Points: 558.40 Bank: 72,495.39 Total Points: 73,053.80 Donate	I can not cry Release these tears It is a weakness I will drown inside Before i falter To purge the posion I can not risk To taint a heart Untouched by pain Pure Beauty should remain so I was once such a soul Innocent eyes to a Gold guided world Such beauty if now Burnt at my touch A wilted rose I can not love A shut my eyes To almost feel the sun I hold your hand And come undone And if only Dreams mirrored reality Eternal battker I would lose myself To save a heart Of pure wonder I will drown inside I can not cry Release these tears To you posion you __________________ Life is pain, life is only pain. We're all taught to believe in happy fairytale endings, But there is only blackness; dark depressing loneliness that eats away at your soul. Sex and the City

05-13-2008, 11:57 AM	#55 (permalink)
bessy Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Greece Age: 20 Posts: 89 Points: 5,733.39 Bank: 0.00 Total Points: 5,733.39 Donate	Very good! I like it!

05-20-2008, 10:11 PM	#57 (permalink)
~river~ I iz st00pid lyke whut? Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,617 Points: 558.40 Bank: 72,495.39 Total Points: 73,053.80 Donate	I am Anne Boleyn the tragic queen of broken hearts and shattered dreams i gave you all i had to give to feed desire to satisfy hunger it was not enough i had no more to give i still live in the heart of your darkest nightmares and your deeepest desires my sacrifice blood spilt in your name will not dry and will not leave you haunt you til you cannot sleep i will make you scream my name vengance is a strange and fought for state of mind you will suffer, you will cry Im Anne boleyn your tragic Queen you found me wanting you found me needing your hunger did not wane the moon will change the tide will rise your memories will never fade the tragic queen my reign continues a legacy to those hearts broken __________________ Life is pain, life is only pain. We're all taught to believe in happy fairytale endings, But there is only blackness; dark depressing loneliness that eats away at your soul. Sex and the City

06-05-2008, 06:59 PM	#59 (permalink)
~river~ I iz st00pid lyke whut? Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: at the heart of your darkest nightmares and deepest desires Age: 20 Posts: 1,617 Points: 558.40 Bank: 72,495.39 Total Points: 73,053.80 Donate	^ thanks steph, it is one of the few i am actually really happy with this is just one i pulled together i had to many words floating around my head and i just needed to do something to unload a bit My Ghost A diminutive reflection No substance to this image you see Just a ghost of who I could be Alone and lost So very fragile These wings I have That will not carry My heart so heavy With the weight of loss So tainted with the sense of need In these eyes you could get lost Forget the you, you are A maze is hidden behind these lashes Join me help me find my way out Alone and lost So very fragile It’s the risk of getting hurt That is beautiful The chance to fly To feel the sun To feel alive With no wings I fall Will you met me Let destiny carry us In her tide Swept away til borders blend And we can touch the stars Fragile wings Diminutive reflection The ghost of who I could be __________________ Life is pain, life is only pain. We're all taught to believe in happy fairytale endings, But there is only blackness; dark depressing loneliness that eats away at your soul. Sex and the City

06-05-2008, 07:29 PM	#60 (permalink)
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